The Reincarnation of Sun Dog: the Two-Spined Salamander with the Best Protection

1. The poisonous tongue has arrived, please sign for it I have read a lot of this kind of system articles, high school or junior high school! Now that I'm in college, I watch less of it. The introduction is so bland that I have no interest in reading the book, really. 2. The content can be more creative. If you think of any magical ideas, just try to write them down! It still feels too rigid. 3. The paragraphs of the article are too long, which ruins the reading experience. Suggested modifications 4. There is too much irrelevant "nonsense" (that is, verbal chatter) that I can't understand what is being said. 5. Let's improve the content! It's hard to attract readers like this. 6. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง and work hard together. It is difficult to get ahead with novels of this type. Although there are many people who like two-dimensional games now, it is really not easy. Collected it, please do your best. I am now a reader of this book, so I just told you what I saw and wanted to say. Encourage each other

Exist? Is it because you promoted Sun Gou that he polluted the second dimension? I still don't believe it when others say it, but I completely believe it after seeing it today. My child likes it very much

Well, I don't have much exposure to the two-dimensional world, so maybe I didn't understand a lot in the first chapter. There seem to be many places where names and characters appear more often? It doesn't matter. I just feel that many people don't know much about the second dimension, and if they click on it, they will be dismissed.

The content of the story is very exciting. It is a work made with all my heart. I have collected it. I hope the author will continue to work hard 😁😁

Fuyuki City is also very peaceful today~

I feel a strong Japanese comic style. The ideas are very good and it will not be an ordinary routine. A few suggestions. Because it is a two-dimensional (?), It is best to present the setting of this world in the first few chapters, except for suspense, as completely as possible in front of the readers. This makes it easier for the readers to take it in (of course this is a personal idea, the author can just take a look)

I came here from a drug test post. I always have a strong sense of anime déjà vu. The paragraphs are perfect. The storyline is quite compact. The introduction is not very good, but it makes people curious inexplicably. How evil is this protagonist? The writing is not bad. Come on.