The Gene Frenzy of the Apocalypse

I think the content is quite good and novel, but as a person who writes science fiction, I also have a problem. The story is not as exciting as a novice novel. I think we can learn from some routine writing methods to make it easier for readers, o(∩_∩)o

Chapter 27 has been blocked on QAQ, and is still applying for unblocking. Those who want to read it can go to the group to watch it. I have uploaded a screenshot of it to the group

Although I am still a little transparent, I shamelessly learned from the big guys and built a small building. If you have any ideas, you can write them in the comments. When you write, simply write down your name, personality, and background setting. If adopted, I will reply below the comment PS: In order to promote the plot, I may make some modifications to the settings given by you (*/ω＼*) Okay, I slipped away~\(≧▽≦)/~ La La La

Ah~ The sea~ Fourteen~ Are you the King of the Sea? Why is it all water!

Hey, do you have two updates today?

The author is big and small, and the article has been read. Let's talk about the setting first. It is novel and unique. The power system and the names of each force are very good and have their own specific meanings. Here is the nomination of "Oasis" Let's talk about the plot, with twists and turns, ups and downs. The plot is tight and the context is great. Unknowingly, I experienced the depressing apocalypse with the protagonist.

I hope this book will be a big hit (please improve it 😭)

The author owes 2,000 words a day for 17 days, totaling 32,000 words.

The animal characteristics displayed by the hybrids in the work are from the documentary "Animal Time", which has been treated in a literary manner (the introduction I posted in the comment area can be used as a small popular science). You can just read it as a novel. If you really encounter such a beast in life, never face it when you are not sure. Just (nonsense) Then, the apocalypse that I understand is that despair and hope coexist, and darkness and light coexist, so the focus of my description may fall on the overt and secret struggles between humans in the apocalypse, the changes in the protagonist's mentality, etc. Of course, the desolate people, corpse beasts, and mutated beasts in the apocalypse cannot be forgotten. The result of writing this way is that my article is unlikely to be a happy article, with fewer emotional lines (after all, I am a single QAQ) The heroine in the early stage is relatively miserable and will be a bit depressed, but there is no rainbow without having experienced wind and rain. No one is born to be extremely strong, right | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ Dan Su, the heroine has a halo, she is my daughter 😜 The most important thing is, please vote, recommend, and collect (broken sound ing)

Fourteen who never act cute 😄

Is there anyone who can help me and talk nonsense with me⊙▽⊙?

Hey, hey, author, you are finally back.

Please add refinement😭

Hey, I ate sour lemon today, fourteen, you know what I mean.

Some thoughts after reading this book 1. The writing is clearer and the details are handled well. 2. The plot of the story is smooth, at least the content written by the author is not laggy at all, and the main line enters quickly and reasonably. 3. A little guess about the character of the protagonist. In the early stage, he was young and naive. If his character is still relatively kind after experiencing hardships in the later stage, he will easily be abused by a group of people who call him "Mother Bitch". I hope the author will be well prepared. (Maybe the author wants to make the protagonist grow up quickly through a series of hardships. Apocalyptic novels are actually more taboo about pure kindness.) Because the protagonist is too kind and is plotted, the plot will be simple, which will make the readers less interested in reading. 4. Regarding the issue of the heroine in the apocalypse who abuses the protagonist in the early stage, I personally suggest that the author consider arranging a golden finger that is different from ordinary people, at least not to let the protagonist be attacked multiple times when facing humans. It's uncomfortable to watch this way and it doesn't arouse the reader's sense of involvement. I think this may be a point that the author needs to control, although I don't know where this point is. Above Message: Overall, this is an excellent apocalyptic novel, and I look forward to its subsequent development. (This is purely a personal opinion, don't criticize me!)

Come on, author! ! ! Try to update twice a day🤭