Immortality in the Floating World

I like the segmentation very much, but the plot is a bit too much to introduce, but it seems to be pretty good, 😂

Why is there not a single comment 😠? I opened the big book and weakly posted a comment... I'm so scared and nervous! ! !

But the beginning is too slow. Conflict should be created. The protagonist should be written at the beginning of the story, and the historical background can be introduced later.

After reading the first three chapters, I think they are quite good, but the plot development is a bit slow. I hope you can work harder.

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The writing is very good, and the author is also very attentive in the dialogue. I have already given the recommendation vote, keep up the good work!

You write the same novels as mine. I like this type. It doesn't involve time travel or fantasy. Although the history is fictional, it is consistent with reality.

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The first three chapters go smoothly, but it also feels slow to pick up. The setting of the novel is reflected in the dialogue between the characters. It can be seen that I have put great care into it. Good reviews 🌹 Maybe I can add a little more description, as well as the reflection of the protagonist's character and background. Come on and update~

I drew a map of Luotian Continent and took a look at it.