Searching for Smoke

This is my first time writing a novel. Even though I have worked hard to revise it, there are still many shortcomings! I hope you all can give me some advice! Thanks!

Let me give you a suggestion. The introduction of your book is a bit perfunctory. The introduction should let people know what the book is about at a glance, rather than making people confused. The writing technique of the novel is still acceptable, which is my favorite type, but you should write more when writing each chapter. Generally speaking, a chapter of 1500 to 2000 words is the word count that novice writers should be satisfied with. Once it reaches about 1000-1200 words, 80% of them will not be read. Since your novel is about exploring the truth, you should write it as a fairy tale, a Chinese-Japanese fairy tale. In particular, the description and rendering of the environment must be well controlled, and what should be written should be written in a brief manner. Come on＾0＾~I'm optimistic about you. It needs to be checked tomorrow⊙∀⊙!

That little girl😍😍

Um, rookie plus one 😁😁 Please give it a try by describing more emotions and expressions. I have just started writing. However, mine should be regarded as scratching the surface, and my writing style is not as good as yours.

The writing is a bit immature and could use more practice. Another common problem is the exclamation point. Sometimes it seems very abrupt if used incorrectly. Some places can be replaced by periods instead of exclamation points. If the article is published, it should be reviewed because there are some punctuation errors. You can read your article again at that time and then make corrections. Looking forward to your progress.

Thank you very much everyone! I am really happy to give me so many good opinions I will work hard because I have you.

My intuition tells me that this novel will be full of the sour smell of love.

It's very well written, keep up the good work!

The writing is very good, but the content is not very attractive. It needs to be low-key at the beginning, but there must be something to make readers continue reading! ! ! To be honest, it is better than what I wrote. Mine is like water in the street. I even want to call myself "Water Lord"! ! ! Come on, author, keep up the hard work!

Well, what chapter do you want to add to the chapter 😁

Looking at the "1" in the recommendation box, I feel a little heartbroken. After voting today, it will be given to you tomorrow. Don't give up! ! !