My Youth Love Story Is Finally Over

The author is completely using love to generate electricity, but come on.

So, whether the heroine is Saki or Harano, if you just think of Saki as your sister, it is impossible to have any other thoughts about your sister. The description of the male protagonist towards Saki in the first few chapters is very ambiguous, but in the end, Harano is just your sister. Of course, the author decides who the heroine is, but anyone who fails Saki must die, everyone must die! 😡

It was uncomfortable to watch. The emotional line between the protagonist and Saki Harano was okay, but some of them were too... Too far from the original work. I didn't see the soul of the protagonist in the Christmas incident. It felt like another great teacher who was a little different from the great teacher. The protagonist is a time traveler. When writing a time traveler, you must first completely put the protagonist as a "person" in front of the audience. Height, weight, hairstyle, appearance, grades, and how he compares to the great teacher. The process of becoming acquainted with the teacher, the impact of the people or things he met after time travel on him, his psychological preparation before the plot unfolds, and the ambition of the protagonist after time travel, whether he wants to go to a prestigious school and get ahead, or live a warm life with short-term parents. For example, the Haruno line is relatively divorced from the original work. The author can deeply dig into and artistically process the people and plots mentioned in the original work, such as Hayama, Yumiko, Yui, and Shibakiza. The protagonist I see now, except for the soul of Yangno, is just a character in the main plot who only serves the plot and has no opinion on the original incident. He imitates the self-destruction of the great teacher, and imitates and begins to replace the existence of the great teacher, re-walking the plot for him. In fact, the author can completely write more. For example, Yukino is dissatisfied with the protagonist's self-destruction. Whose position does she stand on? It's okay if they are very good friends, but Yukino and Takeno don't have a friendship that they formed through major events. Her relationship with O-sensei is the best, so she can make her words clear and put her expectations and anger towards the protagonist clearly, from the perspective of a friend. One thing that cannot be avoided when writing about erotic objects is the real object as mentioned by the great teacher, but what exactly is the real object? Everyone has his own understanding in his heart, but doesn't what readers want to see is the author's understanding of the real thing? Self-destruction is not a solution to the problem, not to mention that neither the great teacher nor the protagonist is obligated to self-destruct. The audience does not want to see the protagonist self-destruct, but to solve the problem from another perspective. In short, I personally think that the protagonist is not like the protagonist, but another great teacher. I don't know if the author will write another book. I'm not here to stir up trouble today. I just want to express my opinion. If there is a new book, I will support it.

I feel like this book has more people than Chunwu

Save it first and find the treasure. Don't end it too early! ! !

If the author can collect all of Isshiki, Saki, and Yangno, I will give you a reward of 100. If you don't reward me, I will be a dog! ! ! Although I also like Yangno very much, it's too worrying to watch. If you don't want to marry me, then don't flirt with her, ahhhhhhhhhhhh

I am specifically looking for Chunwu fans. Come on, the author!

April is your lie, spring is postponed...

It's well written, but I only saw it yesterday, and it was hard to read it in two days.

I feel like the ending is a bit sloppy. I think the writing was good at the beginning, but the interaction with Harano was a bit lacking.

It's over, and their story has come to an end. Thank you, the author, for giving such an ending. I will always remember the never-ending ministry. Looking forward to the new book.

A good book that expresses the feelings in my heart

I found a book with Harano-san as the second female lead (sort of?). It's rare. Come on, the author is awesome.

Eunuch, it's only a few dozen chapters away from being finished. It was suddenly lost. Even if it's a little while, it's fine 😐

The more you see it, the more exciting it becomes, the more you like it, come on!

The probability of the heroine being Harano is very low. The world line is closed ~ According to this rule, it seems that this will not be the case. It can only be one of Isshiki and Saki.

The author looks at it here, can he accept both Haruno and Saki?