Unreliable Little Newbie

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Maybe you want to write a novel that is easy to complain about, but it seems that the sense of substitution is not strong and the story is a little confusing. I hope it can be better in the future.

Already accepted, let's make progress together 🤝

Well, the content is quite interesting. You can add some words and don't go too far in the pursuit of comedy. How can I put it, there are so many such articles now, and it's a bit difficult to stand out. Personally, I think it's perfect if you laugh while crying. Persistence, may you become a god soon

Back to comment. To be honest, I will be a little uncomfortable at first, but I will get used to it a lot later. This way of writing is bold and novel. Come on.

I'm late. Come on, I'm optimistic about you.

The greatest joy of reading novels is a strong sense of immersion. If your thinking is too jumpy, your logic is too confusing, and your words are not clear enough, you will not be able to keep up with the rhythm and it will be difficult to continue reading. Come on.

To be honest, after reading the first three chapters, I had no idea what you were writing. So out of the ordinary