Signing Starts from the Fairy Root

This post collects some ideas for variety shows that have a little bit to do with cultivating immortals. Just a show title is fine! I rarely watch variety shows and don't pay attention to the fandom, so I don't have much imagination in this regard. If you don't have enough imagination, netizens can help! Programs that may be added in the future include: "Survival in the Demon World (The Monster Beast Removes Its Head and Eats It)", "Idol Cultivator (Singing and Dancing Rap🏀)"...

I'm here to talk about it. As a new book, there should be more updates. Readers will know that the author is a weirdo, and people will come. If there is someone, it will become popular 🙂

I have read the book, and I feel it has great potential... I hope it won't make me jumpy (quietly)

Author, your writing style is okay, there are no major problems, and the plot direction is OK, but there are problems with the details. First of all, I won't go into details about the protagonist's IQ. I believe you know it. Secondly, there are many minor points: The first is the contract for the protagonist to sing in the bar. 8,000 For 3 songs is too much, and the bar singer is generally only about 4,500. The second is that the songs sung by the protagonist are not copyrighted. Although whether anyone steals the songs is only a matter of the author, readers will still feel uncomfortable. For some radical readers, not registering the copyright is as toxic as giving away a daughter... Thirdly, in the chapter where the protagonist's sister appears, I thought it was some group activity at first, but I didn't expect you to actually write homework together later? (Strange knowledge has increased. Jpg) I wrote it in a bar. Anyway, I have never heard of it... (Human confusing behavior. Jpg) Fourth, the Su Ziyan in Chapter 8, you can be arrogant. Young geniuses are inevitably arrogant, but the following paragraph ""I thought you had only written one song..." Su Ziyan did not hide her contempt for Chu Yichen in front of her." What does it mean? I don't understand here. There is also the following paragraph where you can't see the protagonist's singing ability. I want to say that not everyone is a singer-songwriter. It's not like there are people who can only write lyrics and music but not sing. What is there to look down on? And at the end, if the protagonist can compose music, he must help? What's the logic? Although the author wrote a question sentence, the dialogue is followed by "Su Ziyan had an idea and said." The problem lies here. The readers have already established the impression that Su Ziyan is arrogant and looks down on others. No matter how you look at it, this sentence has the taste of an affirmative sentence, so it is a bit poisonous... (•́ω•̀ ٥)

I'm a newbie. I read one chapter and I think it's good. However, the author's first two books seem to me like eunuchs. I don't dare to collect them. I'm a bit confused...😅

Gan! Why are they all 30,000 words? You have more than 800 recommendation votes! Tears of envy flowed down from the corners of my mouth!

The male protagonist's character has been criticized recently, so I'm thinking about saving it. In fact, I have always liked this kind of straight male character, but it seems that readers don't have a sense of empathy? If you don't change the character design, you may be scolded more and more miserably... If you change it, the plot in Chapters 3 and 4 will not be easy to use.

I feel that the integration of cultivating immortals and urban entertainment is a bit stiff. Coincidences can be fewer. The secondary plot can be dug in advance. The song selection in the early stage is a bit awkward. I hope that the later (novel) can not be so awkward. A little nagging, don't worry about it 🙂

I prefer that others don't know my situation at the beginning, otherwise others will be suspicious of sudden changes.

My MA, you are all going to kill this 12,000-word seedling! I'll raise it for ten days first

Damn, the title of your chapter, author, scared me 😡

The protagonist, dressed as a woman, is so beautiful!