Reborn: The Frosty Jadeite

Keep up the collection! Persistence is victory✌🏻

All the people here are relatives👪. Writing is not easy. Please recommend, comment and support~~😊😊

Shall I wipe it? Chapter 54 is connected with Chapter 1! I have a whimsical idea. The heroine's grandfather is not just an ordinary fairy, right?

Come on, please update! ! 🤭🤭

Reading 24 chapters in one go was so enjoyable! Great! Come on!

I just want to say 666, success made me give up

Great work (ง •̀_•́)ง, very well written

It's quite good, I'll recommend it in my book!

Congratulations on signing the contract 😁

Hello, I'm here to review a book! (Sorry, I'm a little late because I was busy updating my book in the afternoon.) Okay, now let's get to the point. Your novel is a magical novel in which modern people travel to ancient times, and some fairy tale elements are added in the middle. I like this very much, because pure history and pure love are too boring. Then, the previous part should highlight how the protagonist adapts to this identity, and also slowly explains the adaptation after the massacre. If I am not wrong, this must be a big foreshadowing! ! ! The disadvantage is that when changing scenes, it is more comfortable to use ellipses instead. (This is the case in my book, especially at the end, where there will be more ellipses.) It adds a lot of psychological complaints about the characters, which is also an effective way to shape the characters, but the degree must be grasped, otherwise the writing will be bloated and cumbersome. There is nothing else, overall it is good. Thank you! Oh, and also, there are already more than 30,000 words in just a few chapters, so the main plot can be strengthened. Okay, come on!