Sword Art Online: My Life

Who is the heroine going to be? If it's not Asuna, I'll run away.

Author bacteria, come on, come on. By the way, the Japanese name "Yuki Asuna" can just be typed like this. It is recommended to create a group

Why not use a smart book cover? Where are you going to write about Sword Art Online, SAO, ALO, GGO, Sequence Battle, and UW chapters?

Are you going to reopen the book? What's the name?

1. The title of the book is obviously a fanfic of Sword Art Online. This anime is still very famous and can be quickly discovered by players who like Japanese comics. However, a common problem with this kind of book title is that to use someone as the title of the book, you must first know what someone is. My life is not very attractive. In the introduction, you can see that the author is very thoughtful and nostalgic, but readers may not necessarily buy it. The introduction should describe the plot highlights of the book, as well as some imaginative ideas. At least it should attract readers to read the first chapter. 2. Pay attention to some narratives. Many readers read the book carefully and have the habit of silent reading. Some places are not smooth. 3. Pay attention to the paragraphs. The current paragraphs are too unfriendly to readers on mobile phones. Some are too long, and some are quite fragmented, difficult to read and too messy. 4. After entering the game, the sense of immersion is not strong. It is recommended to add more action descriptions and environment descriptions, so that it will not look like a running account. Come on, I'm optimistic about you

Brother, the first paragraph of the first chapter is too long, which will dissuade many people. . . . . . . .