Twin Lovebirds

Thank you very much for your chapter reviews. However, due to the revision of the article, some of the chapter reviews are seriously misaligned. I will take time to clean them up every day. I hope you can understand.

After reading it, the comments may be a little thin because of the relatively small content. First of all, in terms of writing style, there really isn't much to say about this part. Female video writers generally have pretty good writing skills, so there's no need to worry about this aspect. The plot is not bad. The setting of two souls in one body is more outstanding, but I hope that the original soul is not a supporting role. It is best that both souls have different preferences and everyone likes it, so that the plot can be interesting. In terms of character design, the protagonist's personality is quite outstanding, but as I said, I can't remember the other characters, whether it is the male supporting character who has already appeared or another soul, the impression is not particularly deep. The character I should have is not written out. Of course, this may also be related to the fact that you have written too little so far. But I think if the article wants to be outstanding, it is better to show the character in the early stage, such as the evil plot. The events surrounding the supporting characters are too short, which is one of the reasons why the character is not highlighted. Two suggestions are to either lengthen the events between the supporting characters, or to contact the heroine as early as possible and reflect the character of the supporting actor through foil. This suggestion is for the early stage and one for the later stage. There is also a problem with the agreement. The original soul of the body is not very old, so the agreement will not be so comprehensive. Therefore, it is better for the heroine to propose the agreement indirectly, and this aspect can be slightly modified. The above is my personal opinion and is for reference only. I will vote for you as soon as the recommendation vote is issued. I hope you can support me. Of course, you can also vote for each other.

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As a big fan of the author's novel I think it's time to write something The author's book is the first female-channeled novel I've read (really (｡･ω･｡)). To be honest, the huge change in male-female novels made me uncomfortable at first (I had an indescribable feeling when I read it), but I have to say that the novels written by the author are relatively It's true, (at least I, a scumbag in school, learned a lot of weird knowledge from it), and the writing style is also very good (he was a great essayist in high school!). I think the reason for not being popular is very simple, it's just that there are too few words, it's because the new writer is not famous, etc., But I believe that the author's slow and meticulous work will definitely bring a world belonging to Xi Nu to readers! Come on⊙▽⊙

I've finished reading it. The novel is well written. The author's writing skills are very solid. The scenery at the beginning is very interesting and the atmosphere is well rendered. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗