The Valley of Near Twilight Beyond

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The writing is excellent, the environment rendering is deeply rooted in people's hearts, the sense of substitution is strong, and the suspense color is strong. I like it! Collected ~ Come on!

Creativity comes first, keep up the style, come on!

I read the first chapter and will continue reading later. The opening introduction is very impressive, the story is very attractive, the pictures are strong, and the writing is sophisticated. I like it.

Great cheers, collected. Recommendation tickets will be sent on another day, they are all used up today.

The first two chapters have been revised and some new suspense and foreshadowing have been added, which will not have much impact on the subsequent plot.

The suspenseful atmosphere of the novel is very good, and the description at the beginning is also very interesting But I think it would be better and more exciting to start with a flashback instead of directly opening the narrative The details are very good, keep it up The environment rendering is very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

The title of the book is a bit too literary and not very attractive, but the introduction is okay and the writing is okay, so please give it a try.

The chicken is very good-looking. It will be put on the shelves as soon as possible. Updates will be posted soon. Blow, blow, blow, blow.

I haven't been satisfied with the blocked chapter even if I changed it over and over again. If I changed too little, I'd be afraid it wouldn't pass. If I changed too much, it would be beyond recognition. Ah, it's so difficult... In order to avoid this happening again, it seems that I need to pay more attention in the future 😥

Awesome, awesome, but not enough

The suspenseful atmosphere in the novel is pretty good, the writing style is also very good, and the novel is quite good-looking. My small suggestion is to improve the details a little bit, and add some sub-sections. Please keep up the good work!

Already invested, I hope you will make better discoveries in the future! Come on, little baby, go for it