Outer Eldest Brother

It's tasteless to eat, but it's a pity to throw it away. It's okay to read it when you are short of books!

Can I like it if I want?

It's getting boring, there's not even a female protagonist, a bachelor story? What's the use of the protagonist's training to become stronger? It makes no sense.

Most of the books written about Gou are written as cowards.

Anyone with a clone will basically die! There are also those that can deprive others of their attributes, whether they are immortal or fantasy. I'm also a little bit puzzled. You said it's obviously easier to write about having a younger brother or accepting a little boy as an apprentice, but most of the books are about a little girl with incredible talents. Is it because everyone likes to read this kind of setting?

I've ordered them all, and I'm just giving some opinions. The most important thing is that the author writes it himself, and there is no need to consider my opinions. I personally feel that the writing style and plot design of this article are quite poor, but the story is very innovative. At least I am willing to spend money to read it. However, the author cannot stop writing these things because of some of his own weaknesses. If you want to make money from this, you must strengthen this aspect, instead of writing about 3 chapters every day. So no matter what, I feel that the author still has to work hard to shape the world he writes. No matter whether it is good or bad, as long as there is progress, readers will be happy watching it, and the author will be motivated to continue writing, or simply let the protagonist pretend to be a big b, because I think it is developing in this direction. In this way, simply change to a show-off style, instead of the so-called self-deception of low-key, which honestly affects the viewing experience, and there is no need to bother using clones to suppress the increasingly powerful protagonist's influence and forcefully keep a low profile.

I really can't understand what you are writing. Many things appear suddenly and then disappear again! ! Just like when I wrote my primary school composition, I passed it like a running account. No excitement or excitement. . How about starting a new one?

Starting from the point where you can add any physical object, the whole system of the book collapses. If you think about it for a moment, there will be a lot of bugs.

Some people pretend to be pigs and dogs, and they become real pigs and dogs by pretending.

The Gou in my heart also needs to know what will happen with other people's attacks, how to defend myself, and try to raise my own level as high as possible. If I fight with others, my level will be crushed. My status in the sect should be high but unimportant. If the cultivation level and combat power of the people in the sect are raised to a higher level, there will be no need to take action yourself, etc.

I feel that the protagonist is too tolerant towards Yun Xin. Regardless of whether she has caused too much trouble for the protagonist before or after awakening her memories, the protagonist has not hung her up and whipped her.

Reading this novel cured my insomnia. So boring, no passion at all. Not very humorous.

Eleven Years Old Bookworm The author's writing is good, and so is the plot A few suggestions Firstly, if you are writing an invincible novel, don't add a useless setting. After all, it takes ten thousand years to create a genius, and it takes ten thousand years to become such a waste. Two, find something for the protagonist to do, such as doing some business, making a few friends, learning alchemy and weapon refining, which can give you a bit of life. You can't fish all the time, right? Three, uh, what do you say? There are three important female characters in the article, and they all feel disgusting, especially the senior sister. I don't know what to do. After all, cultivating immortals is not a real society. Is it really okay for you to just use other people's cultivation resources? Even if it is not important, if there is a wheel of cause and effect, the senior sister will owe the fat man a lot of cause and effect. Fourth, the protagonist should be stubborn, but he cannot be stubborn all the time. He can add a clone to do things secretly. For example, the puppet master is very good. If he likes to be a puppet, he can add more points. He can also let the protagonist practice weapons and then add points to upgrade them into Tao weapons. Well, there is also a storage ring, which can also be upgraded with points. The protagonist can learn several skills, such as basic boxing skills, etc., And the protagonist also needs to practice exercises Fifth, the heroine, if the author is good at emotional drama, he can write it, but if not, forget it,

I can't watch it anymore since I wrote The Doppelgänger

Come on, author ✊

Just started watching, give me a small reward of 100

If you are here for Gou, you can leave first. If you are here for Wuwei, you can still read part of it. As for that, you can understand it. . . . . The plot is okay, but it's a pity that the author never grasped the core. It's like writing an essay that goes off topic like crazy, which made me feel mixed.

When I read the second chapter, I found out that a group of people were swiping it because they were natives and didn't read it. . . I have seen people doing this in many places. The natives are good, I like to see the natives. I don't like a person doing physical chemistry and talking about modern jokes while cultivating immortality.

Happy May Day to everyone! It's hard for the author to code words...

I'm here to complain. I thought it was okay before, but this upgrade is just like playing. Yes, it's okay to add points directly to the protagonist. What's going on with the group of people around you? He can reach more than a dozen levels in a few months, and one can become an immortal in a year, faster than the protagonist can add points. This immortal cultivator is just having fun Having cultivated to the fifth realm in the past few decades, he is a genius. It took these decades to reach the fifth realm but only a few months to reach the seventh realm. Then what did you eat in the previous decades? In order to let the supporting characters keep up with the protagonist's strength, they were forcibly upgraded and accepted.

Has anyone read Chapter 15 and left?

Come on, author, your grades will gradually improve.

Have the beginnings of some chapters been changed? Many chapters can't be connected to the previous chapter, and the writing is too dry. Most of the text is the protagonist's inner monologue. I'm really impressed.

The other clone seems to be the Fire Lotus clone.

There must be a tail after all. If you don't have this habit, I won't read your book anymore.

The writing is better than 99% of the time. Dianjiu Wudi's writing is so persistent. I just read it and it's very good

This is the first time I read a book about eunuchs. At the end, you might as well imitate Ma Boyong and do an apocalypse like meteorite escape or something like this. It's better than this.

The writing is okay, I can keep reading.

Is this over and done with? Let's open a holy place for singles first. What I saw in "The Ancestors Are Spiritual in Heaven" is also the invincible singles. You can form a team to open a singles sanctuary.

What a cheat, the author is too ignorant to use it! It will be useless later on