Fox Friends and Fairy Friends

04 There is not much suspense, and the biased parts can be forgiven First of all, let me praise it. The author's writing skills are very good, and the parts that should be written carefully are not redundant, and the places that should be skipped are not dragged out. Great. Furthermore, Gu Yanxiang's description is very attractive to me, and judging from the article, I can't find any obtrusive points. I must have worked hard on it. The style is happy and suspenseful. At least from the first three chapters, the laughter is quite obvious, plus the unique suspense bonus of suspense, it has a unique flavor. In short, the two combine well. Furthermore, find faults. The dialogue + description between Fox Fairy and Hu San in the first chapter feels a little watery, but this may also be the reason why the author is introducing the characters - it is not a big problem. It's just that when I was reading it, although I was laughed at, I really couldn't find the point to continue reading... (If it weren't for the fact that I need to read a book to write a book review, I might have missed a good book.) As mentioned above, the author's skills are not revealed until the second and third chapters. For ordinary readers, once they encounter the verbose voice + long descriptions, they may be persuaded to give up. If something is wrong, correct it and encourage it if it is not. Don't worry about this old book review like me, hahaha. After all, the author's writing is really good. Come on, I'll give you the tickets, call me for the first order 😁

The extra chapters of this book are more exciting than the main text. I particularly admire the author's imaginative extra chapters about Journey to the West.

​[Work Information] Type: Suspense·Ancient and Modern Legend Author: Sitting Alone in Qianxuan Number of words read: 5w+/10w Rating: 84/100 Story Summary: Yang Congxun travels with the little fox fairy Hu San to catch monsters and eliminate evil spirits. Comment dimensions: Introduction to the book title, creativity and innovation, first three chapters, writing style, plot setting, overall perception [Introduction to the book title] (8/10) 1 Title of the book, Fairy Friends with Fox Friends. The title of the book is "Fox Friends and Dog Friends", which makes it interesting and really attractive. In addition, it also implicitly points out a great opportunity for the protagonist to encounter a fox fairy. The story unfolds here, and the title of the book is very general. If it is both general and interesting, then the title of the book will be successful. (4.5/5) 2 Introduction. The first sentence of the introduction is very interesting. The protagonist, main supporting roles and main elements are all reflected in this sentence. However, the following sentence will be a little more detailed and summarized. This is a bit cumbersome, duck does not need to. The author can consider adding a little theater or other introduction, and separate the two sentences, which will make it feel better. (3.5/5) [Creative Innovation] (8/10) After reading the first three stories, the ancient temple encountered a deadlock, the smoke locked the spirit, and the mysterious insect responded. The author has a great imagination, and the short stories he sets are relatively novel. Different from ordinary suspense and supernatural novels, each short story has a relatively complete story setting, and the whole story is very smooth to read. In addition, the setting of the character Hu San is also very original. He is a fox fairy and also a very important "golden finger" for the protagonist Yang Congxun. (8) [The first three chapters] (17/20) The origin of the first chapter explains Hu San's origin and purpose of joining the world. The protagonist Yang Congxun appears in the second chapter and explains his life background. In the third chapter, Yang Congxun enters the temple to stay and encounters zombies. The author controls the first three chapters very well, and the whole story is very smooth and clear. Through these three chapters, readers can roughly understand the tone of the entire story and the identity of the main characters. However, combined with the title, introduction and the origin of the first chapter, the overall feeling is that the little fox is the protagonist, and in the subsequent chapters Yang Congxun takes the dominant position, which is inevitably a bit confusing. (17) [Writing and Dictionary] (18/20) The author's writing style is excellent, and the overall narrative style is a bit biased towards the ancient vernacular, which is also reflected in many words. At the same time, he explains some words or place names in the chapters, which shows his intention. After reading through it, there are no major flaws in the writing style. The story is told very wonderfully, and the description of the scenes, the portraits of the characters, and the narration of the action sequences are all performed very well. Kudos to the author for this. (18) [Plot setting] (15/20) The author's performance in the plot is also very good. The fragments, blank spaces, and transitions of the short stories in each chapter are well presented. In addition, the author's narrative method is elegant and a little playful, which makes reading both tense and relaxing, as if you are on the scene. The author talks in a leisurely and eloquent way, giving it a feeling of a Chinese fairy tale. However, I still have a little doubt. Is the author going to main plot and subplots, or is it just a collection of stories? If it is a series of main lines, then I have not found a specific main line yet. If it is a collection of stories, then what is the purpose of using the same character? There may be main threads that will emerge in the future, but I will only briefly mention them here. (7) The author has done a good job in character design, especially the little fox. The image is vivid on the page. The other characters are also set up in detail and have their own style. I won't go into details here. (8) [Comprehensive impression] (18/20) Overall, the impression is very good. There are almost no typos, no wrong sentences, and no pretense. The story is told simply and neatly, without watering down, but the suspense that should be there is also included. I hope the author will continue to do so, come on! ! ! The above is just my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it. ​

I originally wanted to read the first three chapters, uh, I couldn't help but read six chapters, and I continued to read a few more chapters... I have to say that the author's level of ancient prose is really high. There are a lot of professional ancient prose wordings in it, and he is very particular about the use of pseudonyms. In short, his writing skills are very high. The whole narrative is very smooth and comfortable. I guess the author may be a chronic person. Secondly, the story is a divided model, consisting of several short stories, and then connected by the protagonist, a scholar who is studying. The advantage of this is that it can be written continuously. The disadvantage is that the continuity is relatively poor, and readers may abandon the article at any time if they are slightly dissatisfied. The part about Zhou Yi fighting zombies is particularly thrilling and thrilling. But I don't quite agree with it. As for the author's sub-part, Zhouyi, as a circulated classic, may come from other planets. Let's not talk about this for the moment... The Zhouyi itself is not like the scriptures. It has the power to suppress ghosts and catch monsters. Both Taoism and Buddhism use incantations. Although metaphysics such as Qimen Dunjia and Plum Blossom Yishu are related to the Book of Changes, most of them are derivation methods without energy. The closest thing is the magic Qimen, which can form troops and form formations, but it has nothing to do with Zhou Yi. The Confucian explanation of the Book of Changes is more inclined to the practicality of prescription methods. After Confucius translated the Book of Changes, he sighed that he knew the destiny of heaven when he was fifty. He understood it, but his destiny was his own. Just a personal opinion. This book is very suitable for being made into a TV series, but the author needs to make some extras and add some content. All in all, it's nice to read. Trustworthy.

First of all, the title of this book is actually very attractive to me. It uses the idiom "fox friends and dog friends" and also identifies the protagonist of the story - a little fox fairy. The name Hu San always reminds me of Mrs. Hu San and Mrs. Hu SanBlindly guessing that Hu San must be a Northeastern fox 😏😏😏 Compared with the image of fox fairies (demon) in traditional stories, while maintaining the characteristics of traditional monster literature, the author has successfully incorporated some elements of the currently popular fantasy genre, which can also attract a large number of readers. The author's writing skills are considered very good, the words and sentences are just right, and some parts that are more classical Chinese are also well written. However, not all readers like this style. Anyway, I like it 😏😏😏I haven't seen any typos yetThis is very rare in online articlesThe logic of the first two short stories is also self-consistent. Overall it looks really good. If I have to pick a problem, I can only say that the pace may be relatively slow, but slower has the advantage of being slower. It gives people a sense of eloquence. Overall it's really good. I hope the author will continue to work hard😏😏I am very optimistic about you✌️✌️🤭

I was invited to comment and have been waiting for a long time. A very special theme. This little experience story is really interesting. The story is quite mature, the introduction is good, and it is quite attractive. Maybe it is because of the special choice of characters and background. It is rare to see a suspense that does not have an overly depressing atmosphere. The number of words is also quite large. I feel that the author can use it more and try to change the style of the story or make some other breakthroughs later. Otherwise, there will inevitably be limitations if there are too many stories. I hope you like my review😜 (If you don't like it, just tell me and I will delete it at the speed of light🤭)

I have always liked foxes, and I am very grateful for the opportunity to meet this "fox." Since ancient times, foxes have been related to love, but this book is suspense, with foxes as the protagonist. At the beginning of the novel, I was amazed, because many suspenseful beginnings are mediocre, but because of the author's writing style, I felt the meaning of the great country style. The wording, the dialogue between the characters, all have an atmosphere that makes this novel more complex with its original setting. Later, it progresses naturally, and then you can feel the tense and terrifying atmosphere. I just read a few chapters and couldn't help but write this book review. Keep reading, keep writing, I locked it.

The thief hates writing novels about money and rat tails. He leaves immediately after reading the first chapter 😓😓😓

Portrait of the protagonist. Is the little Taoist priest Yang Congxun handsome? The author doesn't seem to introduce it specifically, he must be very handsome, right?

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I don't know what to recommend about the author's writing style. As long as he writes it, someone will read it. There are only a few suggestions: 1. Don't jump in the direction of the plot. I think the author wants to bring some interesting elements, so the plot can be progressed more quickly, and avoid procrastination in irrelevant places (because I am reading it on a trial basis and have not read the subsequent ones. I have not understood the specific style, so I can only suggest this. If the author's book becomes popular, don't slap me in the face). 2. The author generally uses vernacular for descriptions, and specifically pursues some Water Margin-style words and phrases during dialogue? Now that you have written like this, stick to it. Don't change the language style, but try to keep only a few words with this language style so that most readers can understand it. Don't go to the extreme of converting the entire text into classical Chinese just to show off your skills. It will be difficult for the author to control and readers will not like to read it. 3. If possible, the author should make the number of words in each paragraph shorter, just one period or one paragraph, so that it will look more comfortable to read.

I can't understand this...😭

Yes, there are very few books about foxes nowadays.

Dear book friends, hello everyone, I am the operating officer of "Fox Friends and Fairy Friends". First of all, warm congratulations to "HuPengXianyou" for receiving a million-dollar Silver League reward! Special thanks to Baiyin Alliance [book friend 915161711] for meeting my love! At the same time, thank you all book friends for your long-term support of this work! "Fox Friends and Fairy Friends" tells the story of the young Taoist Yang Congxun and the fox fairy Hu San who travel together to eliminate evil and promote good. This book has a strong narrative logic, interlocking plots, profound writing skills, and very sophisticated exposition. You will benefit a lot from reading it. "Fox Friends and Fairy Friends" is definitely a good book worth reading. In addition, according to the author's instructions, answer the questions of common concern to several book friends. [Question 1] What is the relationship between Yang Congxun and the Manchu Qing court? [Answer 1] The narrative background of this book is from the Qianlong to Jiaqing years of the Qing Dynasty. The story mainly focuses on folklore and grievances in the world, and does not involve too much imperial power. Although the protagonist has many interactions with the Manchus, he is never attached to the Manchu and Qing court. Question 2Is there a female protagonist in this book? Answer 2Of course there is a heroine! There is definitely a heroine! There must be a heroine! Otherwise, the readers will not agree, the people will not agree, and I will be the first to not agree! It's just that the heroine appears a little later. This is set by the author based on the needs of the plot development. Once the heroine appears, she will amaze everyone. Please wait patiently. In addition, let me reveal in advance that the author not only arranged a female protagonist for Yang Congxun, but also arranged a female fox for Hu San. Question 3Is the protagonist handsome? Is the heroine beautiful? [Answer 3] Of course the male protagonist is handsome! Absolutely handsome! Must be handsome! Of course the heroine is beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! It must be beautiful! Otherwise, the readers will not agree, the people will not agree, and I will be the first to not agree! Regarding the appearance and clothing of the male protagonist and female protagonist, I will arrange for the author to describe it specifically to all book friends at the appropriate time. Finally, the operation team of "Fox Friends and Fairy Friends" wishes you all a happy reading!

Dear book friends, the book "Fox Friends and Fairy Friends" has been updated with more than 160 chapters so far. After reading all the way, what is the story of this book? I believe everyone has their own opinions, so please feel free to speak out and just reply below. As a work operation officer, I would like to start with a paragraph to draw out some ideas. It is said that once upon a time there was a mountain with a cave in it, and a large group of fox fairies lived in the cave. The leader of Fox Fairy'er is called Red Back Sly Fox, and he has a son named Hu San. Red Back Sly Fox wants his son to succeed him as the head of the family. However, Hu San was lazy in practicing. The red-backed cunning fox was worried that his son's cultivation was not enough and he would not be able to convince the public in the future, so he said to Hu San: "Look at your virtues, you look like you are ruined. Hurry up and practice in the human world, fight monsters, level up, and gain knowledge." Hu San said, "That's great." The red-backed cunning fox said, "Then hurry up and get lost." So Hu San slipped out of the hole. On Yang Congxun's side, his biological mother is dead, and his stepmother is not a toy. She usually doesn't even want to give him more pocket money. Yang Congxun was unhappy staying at home, so he went to study abroad, staying in an ancient temple on the way and beating a zombie with "Zhouyi". Hu San secretly saw this guy and thought he was awesome, so he showed up to have sex with him. After a heart-to-heart talk, the two found that they had the same likes and dislikes, so Yang Congxun said, "Let's go into the world together?" Hu San said, "OK! Let's go!" Later, Yang Congxun took Hu San to Yixian to study. Yang Congxun had no choice but to change his major and went up the mountain to practice Taoism. Only then did he officially start his journey of fighting monsters and upgrading with Hu San. Well, that seems to be the story.

After reading several chapters, I just can't figure out who the pig's feet are. I'm just impatient

(Read the first three pictures) A good book is a good book, and the characters are very vividly described, but it is a pity that it was born at the wrong time. If people were not so impetuous in the past, many people could calm down and read it. Nowadays, social novels have become fast food and just want to be happy. They cannot calm down and read. There are more bad luck and impetuous characters in this book. It is a pity that the characters written in this book Very vivid, (I decided to save it and read it when I have free time. This book really gave me a big surprise) Come on, I wish the author will write better and better.

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Didn't anyone from the Silver Alliance come over to congratulate you? 😁

Today is the Dragon Boat Festival again, and the operation team of "Fox Friends and Fairy Friends" presents to all dear book friends a "Race to the Cross" by Zhang Jianfeng, a poet of the Tang Dynasty, to promote elegance. The sky was bright and clear on May 5th, and the poplars circled the river and sang the dawn orioles. Before I left the county residence, I heard the chorus of harmony on the river. The envoys are all right when they go out, and the red flag has been drawn in front of the horse. The robes on both sides of the Taiwan Strait are broken and fragrant, and the silver hairpins shine like frost blades in the sun. The red flag opened with three drum beats, and two dragons jumped out of the water. Thousands of swords fly over the waves, and thousands of thunders break through the waves with the sound of drums. The sound of drums became more and more urgent and the mark was approaching. The two dragons looked at the mark as if in an instant. People on the slope were shouting like thunderbolts, and the poles were decorated with rainbow lights. The boat in front grabbed the water and won the bid, but the boat behind lost ground and waved in vain. The sore eyebrows and bloody heads are uncertain, and the hearts of the friends on the other side are burning. Only penalties and rewards for winning or losing, and there are ten boats and five boats traveling between the two sides of the Taiwan Strait. After a while, I stopped playing with everything and took off my tattoo request form. When I take a closer look at the competition, I see that there is a stalemate over the right of way. If you don't think about it, you will have to break up your car and break your car.

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I am autistic... Why... So far behind... I dare not comment on the master's writing style, because I have already shed bitter tears of illiteracy😭. The plot is flawless, the rhythm is well grasped, and the fragmentation is very soul-stirring. Haha, I didn't read too much, but the beginning already gave me goosebumps. It felt like reading an original half-verbal novel, as if I had really returned to the Jiaqing period. Many people write about the past for the sake of the past, which makes it weird to read. However, the large text is very natural and smooth, which shows that the literary literacy is very profound. The reader can directly enter the world you created without using too much pen and ink. I don't dare to comment on anything else. I will definitely become a god in the future!

Dear book friends, with your joint support and efforts, the number of investors in the new book "Fox Friends and Fairy Friends" has successfully exceeded 100. At the same time, the work has successfully reached the investment node of "the work has exceeded 3,000 words per day for 30 consecutive days" on June 30. The investment group of "Fox Friends and Fairy Friends" has now launched the "New Book Betting" activity. Please use your little hands to place a lucky bag for this book. Those who win will receive generous rewards. How to participate: On the [Hupeng Xianyou Investment Group] page, click the [] icon at the bottom right of the screen. Thank you again for your love! ——The operation team of "Fox Friends and Fairy Friends"

The story is novel, and it can be seen that the author has worked hard on the entire novel concept. The few dialogues at the beginning established these characters and gave them obvious character traits. But one thing I want to point out is that the repeated repetition of words such as "I" and "you" in the article cannot reflect the current social background. Regarding this point, the author can refer to the novels of the late Qing Dynasty. Ancient classical Chinese, or semi-vernacular, is still very different from the vernacular we use today. Novel, the most important thing is readability. Therefore, at this level, if the author cannot restore semi-vernacular or classical Chinese in the dialogue, it is recommended to use as few certain words and phrases as possible in classical Chinese. If you want to reflect the current environment, I personally think that the description of the construction style of the surrounding things, as well as the description of the characters' posture and clothing, can reflect it better than verbal description.

Welcome Feng Yike to become the chapter assistant of "Fox Friends and Fairy Friends". The book's operation team has three positions: disciplinary assistant, chapter narrative assistant and role assistant. Enthusiastic book friends who are interested in serving readers are welcome to join the team. ✌️

Watching the author write a novel, I suddenly wanted to write a novel of my own. Forget it, I calmed down and decided not to write it.