Douluo Dalu: I Can Steal Other People's Martial Souls

In the fourth chapter, he started to poison, and he actually gave his life to Tang San. He was not sure whether he was from the Tang sect, so he didn't kill him. If Tang San had been more ruthless, the book would have been finished.

It looks good, author, come on, I want a harem

There is a big difference between copying and stealing. I suggest you try Xinhua Dictionary.

The poison is being stored. There are too few chapters to try out.

Objective comments (complaints) 1. The male protagonist has an arrogant personality, and he can do anything for me. He doesn't know how to restrain himself at all. He dares to speak freely in front of Haotian Douluo. He is really not afraid that people will slap you to death. He has no thoughts of caution at all. And go After entering the junior college, the master accepts disciples, and he will come to him wherever he goes and say, "What are you talking about?" You have no politeness at all, and you are not afraid of Tang San having an opinion on you (you just want your master to teach you, so he will say "Master, you are a big brother", Tang San's respect for the master will make you have no idea). 2. The male protagonist is a stallion. Before joining Shrek, in addition to Xiao Wu, Zhu Zhuqing and Ning Rongrong had made trouble. According to his thinking, he wanted them to pursue him, so he reluctantly accepted it. 3. Looking at the introduction, I thought that the male protagonist's ability is that the five-color divine light can steal martial souls and soul skills. It turns out that it is the function of the main martial soul's double pupils, and the five-color divine light is an amplifying skill.

I found a problem. Many authors now write time-travel fan fiction. The protagonist travels through time without knowing what he is here for? Don't even have your own goals? I just want to lick the main character from behind. In previous time travel novels, the protagonists all had goals. Some wanted to be the strongest, some wanted to live a happy life, some wanted to live forever, some wanted to have wives and concubines, and some wanted to be emperors, but the premise was that you had to work hard to become stronger, then you could achieve your goals. Now look at it, there is no goal, no direction, everyone is just like Diaosi is a lazy person who eats and doesn't work hard. He just wants to follow the protagonist and lick him wherever the protagonist goes. The protagonist gives him some leftovers and is very happy. From the beginning to the end, he follows the protagonist. Author, you write this fanfic. The protagonist is your own character, not the original protagonist. Have you ever described the image of your own protagonist? Have you ever described the protagonist's character? Does the protagonist have any distinctive characteristics? Not at all. I only know that the protagonist is a time traveler and knows what happens next. Then he finds the protagonist and starts to lick the protagonist. So, author, what's the point of writing this novel? The protagonists of the articles you write are not the characters you wrote, but become the protagonists of the original works. The characters you write are just the dogs behind the original protagonists. So why did you write this novel? Just to make the characters in your novels look like dogs?

Is he really a time traveler? The child holds animal milk, has double pupils, and robs tombs. Anyone who has traveled through time knows who that child is, right?

Disgusting, is this cheap? This is a gangster.

The protagonist is so awesome. He had sex with Zhu Zhuqing when he was 12 years old. When he was 14 years old, he was one against four. At the age of 15, he was even more awesome.

The licking master's 😐 abandoned