Love Flowers but Not Butterflies

I think the paragraphs should be shorter, some paragraphs are a bit long. The plot is quite interesting, I need to practice more on my writing Come on

Brother, I briefly read it, and I personally feel that your writing style is suitable for writing short stories, such as "Passing Through Your World" by Zhang Jiajia

I feel that the character's personality is not very prominent (it feels a bit casual), the narration is very elegant, and the dialogue is a bit boring (like Qiong Yao). From the book, I guess the author is a person who lives a slow life (it feels like a slap in the face)