All Aspects of Life Are Yours to Taste

Everyone, I'm back. The main thing is not that I stopped writing, but that my phone is broken. I have changed my phone in the past two days. Sorry, the daily updates will be regular. Three updates a day, no less than 3,000 words per day. The first update is from 0:00 to 1:00, the second update is from 11:00 to 1:00, and the third update is from 16:00 to 19:00. Also, we have a book club, you can check it out: 368870502

First of all, I feel very shocked that each chapter is a complete story. Or it wouldn't be an exaggeration to call you a contemporary Chekhov. The capacity of the story is enough to prove that you have rich insights or eyes for discovering life. It would be really strange if your work is not signed. I say this as a reader. I sincerely support you and hope you can finish this book.

Great work and looking forward to subsequent updates!

I heard someone wants to drink chicken soup? As I walked, I got excited writing code words.

Okay! Just need to divide it into paragraphs again! (Spread flowers)

Well, thank you very much for letting me think of someone more than once today. Also, you can update less and just burst out from time to time (my heart is bursting). I actually hate chicken soup. It was originally just for relaxation. This book did relax me, but it was another kind of relaxation. You have made me a fan. If you dare to write, I dare to read. I wish you to sign the contract soon (don't collapse later) 🌹🌹

Damn, I'm here to test the poison Here are my two humble opinions 1. . . There are too many things. Although it is an online novel, this is the first time I have seen this usage. I think... It will be more formal, and even if it is used..., It is all over the article, which is not good 2. Some short paragraphs are too long. This is a criticism of many new writers, including me. I have changed it many times in the future It is most likely a bit poisonous, please forgive me!

Big suggestions: 1. Although it is a short story, you should still pay attention to the segmentation. 2. If an article full of life mottos makes you boring, then you should skip it. 3. I feel that if you write this kind of short story, you will be exhausted. If you can't think of it, you can write it to Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio. (That's all I can think of 😳😳) (My humble opinion)

Well, I just took this book to relax, thank you very much. 😡

Come on, Ollie

I'm here to be spicy. The author is great. Every story is intriguing. I like it very much.

Um, I've used up my investment times, so I'm sorry ಥ_ಥ.

The first point is to divide the article into paragraphs. Please divide each paragraph of your text into paragraphs within 4 lines. A lot of them are blocked together. There is also an entire chapter without paragraphs. The look and feel is so bad that I have no idea of ​​reading it. The second point is punctuation. Writing is not chatting. Please use correct punctuation when writing. One period is enough for each paragraph. If you want to express more, please use... This, thank you. I feel a little helpless, so I'll just write it here. Overall evaluation, the writing style and writing are acceptable. I will not comment on the chicken soup article because I don't like to read chicken soup.