Qingling Sect

The style is unique, but there is one thing that makes readers a little bit uninterested when reading it. I hope more things can be added to arouse readers' curiosity.

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There is nothing wrong with the writing, but the storyline is too bland at the beginning, and the novel focuses on talking and communicating, but it is not very interesting and makes people laugh. The details are not enough. Some tedious things can actually be mentioned in one stroke. This can speed up the development of the plot. This is probably what I can see. I hope the author will continue to work hard and start from the shortcomings. I believe that one day it will shine.