Under Heaven

It is really not easy to write a book for the first time. I am uneducated and I am not very good at expressing myself. It is difficult to describe the story in my mind. Every word is extracted. Please support me! ! Kneel down and thank you! ! !

I have read the first three chapters. The writing is good and fluent, the story settings are edible, and the pace is a bit slow. The setting background in the first three chapters is a bit too much... The overall writing style is more traditional fantasy, and the overall impression is not bad. Come on!

The opening chapter is very grand, just like the Genesis chapter at the beginning of the Bible. The writing is very good and the layout is very comfortable. Come on!

After reading it, I feel that the author does not look like a newbie. The story is smooth and the writing is excellent. Most importantly, the author has created a mythical origin himself, which is very nice. From the whole article, it is basically non-toxic, and it is recommended to take it into the pit. Then, big cheers to the author! (look forward to commenting)

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Jiang Wenhan😁One word difference

Here I go, nice article. I hope the updates will be faster

Imaginary history? The content is quite thoughtful, the plot is okay, and it reads smoothly.

The name and introduction are a bit similar to fantasy or fairy tales, come on

I think it's more suitable for fantasy channels

It feels like flowing clouds and flowing water. The writing is great. Come on.

I've read 5 chapters, and I don't read much about history. Let's briefly talk about it 1. The writing is smooth, the writing is good, and the narrative is in place. I should have a certain foundation 2. The story setting is very interesting and it unfolds quickly 3. From what I saw at the beginning, I think it is a work with great potential 4. Received, keep going.

Heart to the Peak has been collected, please return it, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The writing style is very pleasant and relaxed~ The title of the book is also very concise! There is something for people to watch. The character development of the protagonist is very interesting! He is an interesting person~ The writing is very smooth and the story progresses smoothly! It's just that the plot progress is really slow... The amnesia is only reached in the fourth chapter, and the background knowledge is still introduced in the sixth chapter... Please speed up a little! Come on!

It's so scary, the author's narrative ability is outstanding, the organization is clear, and the reading experience is excellent. Work hard to update, come on, the score of this book will not be bad

Just a few words, I was a little confused after reading it, the author will hurry up and update it