Qingfeng Xiaozhu
清风小筑
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 25k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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9Chapters
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After reading 5 chapters, let's briefly talk about my opinions 1. The writing is relatively smooth, but some scene transitions are a bit abrupt, and the emotional changes of the characters are also a bit unexpected. It can be written in a little more detail 2. The setting is relatively traditional, and the story unfolds very quickly 3. Generally speaking, the main problem is Taiping, which is a bit like keeping a running account. It is recommended to expand and write more, so that it will be more layered. 4. Come on