Douluo's Ultimate Ice

It's all a**, what's the use of this management if I don't have anyone 😭

When Tianmeng Iceworm was captured by Di Tian, ​​Tang San didn't seem to have become a god yet, right?

I feel that the author did not understand the original work carefully enough. In addition, the author's writing style also made me feel a little immature, and in many places it was at the level of composition written by middle school students and primary school students. For example, in the episode where Qin Li saw the Ice God and the Dragon God, the exchange before the fight was a bit lost! Why do you say that? First, the Dragon God and the Ice God are powerful men at the same stage, but the Dragon God talks about little silkworm babies, which clearly has the taste of a child's knowledge; moreover, the exchanges between the Dragon God and the Ice God are "haha" and "hahahaha" from time to time. Do you think a strong person at this stage will "hahaha" easily? Moreover, a war is about to begin; and the reason why the Dragon Clan and the Ice Silkworm Clan are at war is not that simple. For opponents at the same stage, they are still called gods. It is not necessary to write that the Dragon God despises others; furthermore, if the Ice God seals the Dragon God, what about the Dragon God in the God Realm? One more thing needs to be said here. The words of the Dragon God, "Abominable! Dragon God..." Are too pale and feeble. Let's change the description, "The Dragon God's eyes narrowed slightly, his divine power surged, and he hummed, and with one move, the Dragon God's wrath instantly surged." Change it to say "Abominable" and "Haha", which is out of character. He often says the names of moves during battles. He doesn't have time, and it's just too good to be true.

It's not that I'm trying to bully you. Soul beasts in the Douluo world need at least a hundred years to have the intelligence of a child. What you wrote about Dream Ice Silkworm is too bizarre. Author, you can change it. It doesn't matter if it's one hundred and thirty or one hundred and three years old. I hope the author can adopt my opinion, sorry for bothering me.

I just want to ask who the hell is the protagonist? Is it Qin Li or Ling Feng?

To be honest, the body of the ice silkworm is still a bit weak. The author can consider the evolution of breaking out of a cocoon into a butterfly.

After looking at it, there is actually no need for the villain to appear so early.

The author has some priorities, and the protagonist does not have as many roles as the apprentice. There is not only one way to become a god. "Dzi Bead Transformation", "Dionysus", "Ice Fire Demon Chef" and "Divine Seal Throne" all have reached the god level but have no god status. Soul beasts are not recognized by the gods and cannot inherit the god status, but they can reach that level without the god status, but the difficulty is much higher than inheriting the god status and becoming a god.

I am a ruthless book-warming + collecting robot, so keep up the good work! Collect my books when you have time!

I don't know if the protagonist's reputation will surpass that of Huo Yuhao. They should become brothers.

Why is no one **? There are really few people in this group!!!

Hello everyone, now I am going to take the dual protagonist route of Qin Li and Ling Feng, okay? 😥

Why does it feel so good to look at it so unexpectedly?

The dual protagonist route is very novel, but it is also difficult to control, so go for it. In addition, the writing style needs to be mature. Overall, the readability is still very strong.

Let me ask you, how many photos are updated in a day? ? ?

If you have any questions, you can ask them😄😄

I've recommended it here. If anyone likes it, please give it a recommendation. Don't ask for anything less 😜

I was wondering if Tian Meng is not called Tian Meng until he has practiced cultivation for a million years. It seems that one hundred thousand to nine hundred thousand years is called Golden Thread Ice Silkworm or something. I haven't seen it for so long that I forgot 😥

There are too few updates. I don't like to follow updates, so I'll collect them first.

Don't be a eunuch, I will kill you

Why did the protagonist change? One becomes a tool.

What does being a writer mean? Is it the same as being a writer?