Extraordinary

The author's writing style is very good. The text is a bit short, so I can't tell what the plot is, but the setting of the protagonist is quite interesting, and there are many foreshadowings. Come on!

The author's writing style is very good. The preface written at the beginning can be said to be cleverly used, and the foreshadowing in the first two chapters also makes people want to read on. Also, I also want to have a fat orange that I can jerk off to at any time! Uh... Forget it, let's just stick with the puppets, Fat Orange is too fat~

It's okay, I invested, you have to stick to it

The writing is fresh and refined, a very good article

It is really not easy to write a new book. Thank you for your support. If you vote for me, leave a message below so that I can find you. Thank you...

Quite interesting! Collected! Take your time and watch! Lots of updates! Welcome to visit us again!

Please leave a comment. You don't need anything else. I don't want to play alone...🤐🤐🤐 Please...

Return visit! Come on! See if your male coach is 😍

Gee, the author probably has a basic foundation, which is much better than some newbies. The story flows very smoothly and the writing is of average quality. I like the protagonist's neither salty nor bland way of doing things. Also... Md What a coincidence, look at my pen name, does it look familiar?

Yes, you can eat this bowl of rice. The language is concise and the idea is clever. Keep up the 2 updates. Come on.

The writing is good and the descriptions are spot on. Just keep writing more!

Received, the writing is very good, and the paragraphs are also detailed. It reads very fluently, come on💪. Waiting for updates

The writing is good, but the sentences are a little short. Come on!

This cat is okay, please keep writing.

The writing is very good, and the writing style is also good~ Come on

The new chapter is also great, come on, come on

The writing is good, and the suspense set up at the beginning is great. Maybe I haven't read many paragraphs that are so sparse, and some of them are empty. Anyway, come on!

The author's writing style is so fluent, I support 👍

Come on (*'▽'*)♪

It is recommended that the paragraphs are not divided too finely. This is not good. It will feel like you are stretching the page. I also suggest revising the introduction. It feels too bland. Make it more awesome or exciting. (Don't pay too much attention to the opinions of the above individuals)