Earth Spirit Sequence

Well, after reading the update. Probably a story similar to Under the Dome. This type is not easy to grasp. Especially when you want to add family, friendship, and love. Too many emotional lines require too many supporting characters, too many supporting characters require too many story lines, and too many story lines will make the whole story fragmented. So there have been many sad stories about digging holes but not filling them, or even the entire main line going astray, and being pulled back forcibly, but all the readers left. The above is all nonsense, please ignore it. That's what I see now. The background setting is pretty good. The character description is good. The plot design is good. Rhythm control, okay. Conclusion: A qualified and exciting combat novel. PS: 1. The villain who appears is a bit unexpected. Although I know this is a normal routine in a hot-blooded novel, I still feel uncomfortable. Personal perception. 2. For this kind of passionate and exciting fighting novels, we should try our best to avoid taking advantage of urban literary hot spots. Doesn't it smell good under the dome? 3. Female characters in this type of novel should not appear too early. 4. Although I am not very optimistic about the subsequent results of this book, I still invested in it. I have a pretty good investment vision, and I have already signed contracts for 39 new books I have invested in before. Hope it brings you good luck. Well, that's it.

I woke up early in the morning and added six investments. I am happy and thank you 😄😄

After reading a few chapters, I felt very comfortable with the paragraphing, wording, dialogue, and description of the environment. However, there is still a lot lacking in the description of characterization, plot, atmosphere, etc. Another point is my personal feeling that the author does not have enough control over the direction and rhythm of the story, which leads to a feeling that the development is a bit slow. In general, for newcomers, these things can be gradually improved as they write more and more. As of now, in addition to experience and rhythm control, it is quite good. Regarding this shortcoming, I personally suggest that it can be solved with a more complete outline and detailed outline. Come on. In addition, as far as I have written so far, the story is still a little less attractive to readers, but for fantasy articles, a million is the beginning, so don't be discouraged and keep going!

Although I have just read it, I can see that the author has his own ideas and wants to construct a complete story. However, the number of words is too few and it is not enough to read. Come on, I will vote for you and update soon.

Received, the author's writing is very good, but maybe I don't understand it because I write about female videos 😁, but it can be seen that the author's writing style is profound, and the plot's various foreshadowings are laid out naturally and smoothly. Come on, come on 🌹🌹🌹

The writing style is very smooth, some places are very interesting, and many scenes, characters, and psychological descriptions are very delicate. The only drawback is that the beginning is a bit delayed, and the three golden chapters are not handled well. The beginning also feels too ordinary, but some parts are consistent with my own experience and thoughts, and I can bring it in without affecting the reading. Also, I would like to ask if this is an upgrade stream? It feels like I haven't entered the main line after reading seven or eight chapters. If it is an upgrade stream, it would be better to have more conflicts, which will be more attractive. Come on!

Not much to say, here are the recommendations and votes, and I will work hard to update.

Very interesting writing, thank you to the author

Already invested, the author is very grateful

I accidentally discovered this book of fairy grass. I have already voted for recommendation. I just hope the author will update it soon. Say important things three times: good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Update, update, update soon

Let's circle it: Except for the first chapter, which has a bit too many words, the writing style is very good, and many descriptions are particularly spot-on. I hope the author will work hard!

It's so beautiful. I spent so much time reading it that I forgot all about food and sleep. The phone I was reading was even out of battery. I couldn't help but charge it while reading.

I've finished reading it, it's not enough, please update soon. The latest chapter I like very much: Even if there are thorns everywhere, there is still a warm and bright sun, and the grass grows and the orioles fly. Come on, come on ୧(๑•̀⌄•́๑)૭

Thank you Jixi for helping me many times.

The opening chapter is great. The writing is very good. I feel that it is very detailed and can arouse resonance. The first three chapters are not fast-paced. I feel that they are more in-depth passages. They are my favorite content. I support it and keep updating!

I didn't understand it at first. Wen Liang is the protagonist, probably, recommended.

1. The poisonous tongue has arrived, please sign for it: To be honest, I think it's a bit clueless... The words you use can be beautiful or bold, but they must be done step by step. Pay attention to the details. This is the basis for your subsequent development. Have you written the outline and details? This type of novel has high requirements for this (´-ω-`), (if I write it, just pretend I didn't say it...) 2. The writing is delicate, but the characters' emotions are not handled well. The characterization of the characters and the environment is also very important in this type of article (actually, I also have another point that the introduction is like science fiction, and the novel classification is indeed oriental fantasy😂) 3. From what I understand so far, the plot is very good! If only I could understand a little more. 4. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, although my words are a bit venomous, they are all my true thoughts. Of course, it might be me... Encouragement

One of the few books I can read.

It's still okay to write, so why don't you sign the contract?

There's no problem. It looks like you're no longer a newbie. Come on.

After such a long time, I didn't expect that there are only so many chapters. Please update soon.

As someone who has rarely watched fantasy, I really think Da Da's work is good. I was honestly surprised when I first read the introduction. "The rabbit turned around and ate the wolf... The rooster and the eagle competed for the sky." I think these sentences are full of philosophy. The novel's idea of ​​​​recreating the human sequence is indeed attractive enough. Big cheers for the author! 🌹🌹

The introduction of the novel really attracted me! Then I read the article. The description is very good, and I like the paragraph structure very much. It is long and short, and it gives me a visual feeling without being piled up. It is super good ۹(･༥･´)و ̑̑

My eyes lit up after reading the introduction. The author's introduction is very well written, and the opening chapter is also very good, which can well enter the atmosphere. The setting is very interesting, and the author's writing style can control the whole text well. In short, I wish you a great success

In fact, I clicked on this book after seeing the introduction, and then I thought the introduction was quite attractive, because I am the kind of person who only decides whether to read a book after reading the introduction.