Zhutian Xianwu Editor

Please don't be a eunuch, please update soon.

Let me emphasize that this book is a cool novel, not a dark novel. The protagonist is dark. I doubt whether we are reading a book because the protagonist is as white as white paper.

I read a lot of online articles and there are a lot of novices, but I can't tolerate this book in my heart. One by one, I reported the trolls who trolled the author, especially when a buddy brought out the real Gu. It seems that no one said that this book should be compared with the real Gu, right? I think the pace of the author's book is actually quite good. There are some minor flaws. The author's pursuit of fun is a bit too much. For example, the three hundred people made me embarrassed to death. If the author wants to keep the book alive and achieve better results, he can make the protagonist a little bit more humane, and the outline can be left alone. If the protagonist is a little more lively, basically no one will complain. Originally, this book is not a dark one. To be honest, I think the protagonist is just not a human being and doesn't do any bad things. I don't know why so many people criticize it. It's actually quite strange.

The protagonist no longer needs this incomplete evil-proofing sword book, so why not throw it out for people in the world to fight for? Let them eat dog? Anyway, the swordsmanship is incomplete, so even if someone else gets it, it will not pose a threat to the protagonist.

Dear author, come on, just write according to your own ideas ✍🏻. However, I have something to say here, don't mind it. I don't know who said it but I forgot about it, but it feels right when I think about it. There is no strongest method (artistic conception or law), only the most suitable method (artistic conception or law). After all, this is no longer the era of online writing. If you still write in the same way as before (practice the strongest skills, build the strongest foundation, and then fight monsters to level up, it is as simple as beating monsters and drinking water), I am afraid it will be difficult to stand out among tens of millions of novels. Nowadays, if novels want to be popular🔥, they either have to be great (have a lot of appeal), or they can only rely on creating new genres or having great imagination and writing new tricks that others have not written before. In addition, the author gave us three physical constitutions to choose from in the first two updates. The first and second types of constitution are no worse than the third type of constitution. Your mind is wide open and you can dig deeper into it. 1. For example, the first type of physical body, the heavenly body, can be written in the direction of the unity of heaven and man, peace and tranquility, and the elimination of inner demons. If it is at a high place, it can also be written in the direction of the avenue of life (or the corresponding avenue of death), sublimated to the avenue of creation, and the creation of all things, which is not much different from Pangu's creation of the world and the evolution of all things. 2. The second type of yin and yang constitution, the yin and yang avenue is the foundation of the world. Without yin and yang, the world will be unbalanced. The yin and yang avenue can also evolve to the three talents, four images, five elements, six paths, seven stars, eight trigrams and nine palaces, or reverse the two rituals and one yuan. Therefore, the upper limit of the yin and yang constitution is also very high. Therefore, it is not necessary to have the third type of constitution to attain enlightenment. On the contrary, it feels that the third type of constitution is a bit "empty" and too metaphysical. Of course, the above are some of my little thoughts. How the author writes ✍🏻 is up to you. It is best to write ✍🏻 according to your own ideas. Come on ✊ I hope it can 🔥 rise and end with victory. Come on, author ✊✊✊

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It's best to have one world and one gender. The different treatment of men and women in each world is a highlight. It's best to have no female protagonist, so the focus is on the plot.

The author can make the two sisters Yao Yue into female lickers or they can't be offended. After all, the protagonist is invincible in this world and needs to have some fun. The child can be an asexual person, but it's best not to be a drag. It feels so toxic to lead people through the world.

Can we not write about Jin Yong? Can it be done? Just pick up any sci-fi time travel book and 100% of it contains Jin Yong. It makes me think that I can go to hundreds of forums to talk about "On the One Hundred Thousand Evolutions of Jin Yong's Martial Arts World"

It's really scary. You are planning a five-year plan!

The contract status has changed, so let's celebrate by lighting an atomic bomb.

Let me just say something here. The protagonist of this book killed tens of thousands of people in the world of Swordsman. I personally do not accept dark literature, so I withdrew it. If you can accept it, you can read it and hope it won't be deleted.

Put on a stick of incense first! 🙂

Finally, there is a book that is not as stupid as those on the mainstream rankings, but it is actually a eunuch.

I would like to support it all. At present, the author's idea is very attractive to me. The invincible flow is also very suitable for my taste. However, the martial arts is still not strong enough. I feel that the martial arts has no development except that it is powerful at the beginning. How to continue to develop in the future will not be the same as practicing the essence of Qi and practicing Qi to transform into the spirit, right? No way?

As a bookworm who has read novels for almost 20 years, there is nothing wrong with the portrayal of the protagonist in this book! It would be too inappropriate for you to use your own ordinary people's thoughts to introduce the protagonist's mentality and way of thinking! It is obvious from the first chapter of this book that the protagonist is not an ordinary person, as if he is born with a lack of humanity! So I feel that all the events that the protagonist does later are very logical! The protagonist is not a good person to begin with. It should be said that the protagonist is a seeker or seeker of knowledge! You can't judge the protagonist solely on the basis of good or bad. Whether the protagonist or supporting character in a book is well or poorly portrayed depends on the whole thing. From the beginning to the protagonist's background panel, personality, and behavior, there's nothing wrong with it.

Read the latest chapter. Suddenly I didn't want to read this book anymore. When I read the last chapter, I felt that the child was so cute. As a result, this chapter treated children like this, and suddenly I didn't want to read it anymore.

I just read the first three chapters. Character: Cold and rational. Goldfinger is currently appearing. Deduction of skills, fusion and completion. Killing people can get points, which are called (sacrifice points) in the article. The basic unit of the function of Goldfinger. It is speculated that in the end, it will either break ten thousand methods or create ten thousand methods. It seems that all astronomical texts like this tune. It is recommended to write less about the Jin Yong series. All his books have been written, and they are basically not good. There is also the trilogy Double Dragon, In the past few years, Zhu Tianwen has changed from the main body of all laws to the sole one. Don't be careless in the setting. Recommended copies Low Wu: Legend of the White-haired Witch, Tianya Mingyue Dao, Xiao Yuer and Hua Wuque Zhongwu: Snowflake Goddess Dragon, the best in the world, Magic Sword Life and Death Chess Gaowu: Fengyun, Shuiyuedongtian. Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty (I haven't read this one) There is nothing to say about the copy of Xianxia, nothing more than gods and monsters Liao Zhai, Fairy Sword One, Fairy Sword Three, Zhu Bajie series, Seven Fairies, Search for the Gods, Jingwei Reclamation, Eight Immortals Crossing the Sea, Journey to the East, Battle for Heaven and Earth, Monkey King, Lotus Lantern Prequel, Twelve Zodiac Legends Journey to the West, Fengshen List (ceiling) Having said so much, I'm just talking about it. Don't mess with the settings of the original world. This is a big poison. The wonderful thing about Zhutianwen is that the worlds we have seen all have plots that we want to change. The protagonist in the author's work is so powerful that it can be called a hang-up. Unlike the traditional Goldfinger accelerator, there are no restrictions. Once you enter the God and Demon dungeon, you can fight against Buddha within four volumes. Zhutianwen is very comfortable, just like traveling. Strength is just an embellishment on the journey. What we see is a different scenery. 😴😴😴😴😴

Personally speaking, I didn't want to read the first thing I saw in the introduction. Because I have read too much, everything that should be written and should not be written has been badly written. The first world of Zhutian type books must be able to retain readers. That's what I said. Most readers who like to read Zhutian type books are not interested in Xiaoao.

What a pity this book

I don't want to read new books, I think they are very ordinary and nothing new.

The writing is quite good. The author just needs to write according to his own ideas. There are so many readers and everyone has to listen to what they have to say, so why not write it anyway. Except for the hard-core readers who write hundreds of words of various arguments, many people just vent their emotions in one sentence. Those who talk about three views, many of them now want to dig up the author's grave after watching Water Margin: The Golden Ping Mei. Taking out the ashes to criticize is not in line with current values. There are some literary and artistic works that do not conform to their so-called three views, and they report frantically while scolding us for not being able to produce movies and TV series of the same level as Game of Thrones and House of Cards. People like that get scolded crazily when something they like is criticized, and when they see something they don't like, they scold them like crazy. That's the kind of person. Many people talk about three views and want to take the moral high ground in front of others. They are unhappy, but they want to but can't do it directly. By putting a big hat on others, they can feel comfortable and feel that they have a high moral level. In fact, most people know that there is a difference between literary and artistic works such as novels and movies and reality, but how can you vent your emotions without pretending to be stupid.

I thought of an upgrade route for the author. Like Tudou's novel, the world view is the lower plane and the Great World. The lower plane is about fighting to break the sky and moving the universe. The combat power value is at least super martial. Afterwards, in the Great Thousand World, it is the world view of the Great Overlord. In it, the Fusion of Heaven Realm is equivalent to the Fighting Emperor. There are eight great realms after that. Don't be afraid of running out of content to write. According to the book, the Supreme Flyer will never reach the edge of the world in his lifetime. (It can be said that the Supreme Flyer can open the Supreme Dharma Aspect as high as Ultraman, and can fight a Dou Emperor with one hand.) The author can learn from the world view, at least there is a grand background to surround it, and he is not afraid of collapse. The scores for traveling through the world can be classified according to the first world from low martial arts to medium martial arts, (Swordsman) the second world from medium martial arts to high martial arts, (Peerless Double Pride) the third world from high martial arts to super martial arts, (Jian Wang III, this world is called high martial arts to super martial arts. I recommend it, see if the author wants to write it.) Then completely upgrade to the last world view, and decide on the main line, what is the first person in the world? Then, in the name of collecting supplies and perfecting the exercises, we went to visit the worlds with the most votes from readers. Satisfy the reader's curiosity. If there is no outline for the world behind the author, you can consider the ones written above.

Is this the end? ? ? ? ?

Hermaphrodite? I think they are intersex people 🤭

After reading the previous article, please cheer for the author. I hope I can persist

I see clearly that your golden finger can only be modified and deduced, and it cannot directly allow you to realize the perfect martial arts, nor can you add points. Even if you, a modern person, directly receive Lin Pingzhi's memory, you have no experience in cultivating internal power. It would be better if you advance the timeline a few years. Also, don't you use the Sunflower Book to consume internal power? You can kill Yu Canghai just after learning the sword technique to ward off evil. You think he has lived in vain for decades, and he is still fighting with more than 300 people. Can you be more realistic?

The body was actually blown up😰

Will this person enter the palace? Can you watch it?

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