Chess Pieces in the Heavens

The author shows extraordinary literary skills despite being ordinary, and every word of his work can be described as a gem. The diction is gorgeous to create the atmosphere, the idea is novel, the subject matter is original, and the plot is ups and downs and gripping the hearts of the people. The idea is very big and it is relatively new. I personally think the writing is pretty good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and the logic is still relatively strong. The author has a suggestion for you. You need to capture the reader's heart at the beginning, that is, be more vivid in the front~

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I rarely read men's books and am attracted by the author's whimsical ideas

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The author has a lot of ideas, the writing is great, and the writing style is also good. It's just that the first chapter was a bit confusing, but the rest is very good. I support the author a lot, come on.

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The beginning of the chapter is full of pitfalls. It's too imaginative.

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