Stars Are Far Away and the Stars Are in Chaos

1. Very imaginative and open-minded. 2. Regarding length... Some paragraphs are too long. It is recommended to shorten them. Otherwise, it will affect the reading experience and make people unable to read (abbreviation: abandon the article). 3. Pay attention to uncommon knowledge. 4. A little more tension and a certain amount of tightness. Your imagination can be wild and unconstrained, but don't be too fragmented. 5. How many words did you write in each chapter... Too many! I personally think this is not good, personal opinion. Let's take our time and let time make Star Trilogy stronger! Come on ٩( 'ω' )و

1. The paragraph is too long, a bit boring and tiring. 2. Data is difficult to control, right? ( 'ω' )و, Come on! 3. There is too much narration, it is a bit slow to warm up, and the early stage appeal is very poor! We should get to the point earlier, and these explanations can be explained bit by bit later. Come on

Unknowingly, we have entered the fourth volume, The War of Hades. Will the Nuak take Pluto? What is the fate of the Styx Fleet and humanity?

Have all the characters appeared? The sub-genre is Zhongshan Wolf, and it turns out that Mike is the main villain.

This imagination is so rich, I have to admire it, come on!

The characters read real and believable.

Go out and walk around

Patiently create different characters. Only slow work can produce fine work.

Good book T_T, not many people write seriously these days... Hard core technology, reasonable assumptions... Of course, for a picky person like me, the plot can't be too vivid. The author can improve it a little... Is it inspired by "The Three-Body Problem"? I feel that this article is more or less influenced by this book...

[Muzi Comment]: Those who are involved in science and technology are basically "illiterates", haha, but it does not affect my reading. After all, "The Three-Body Problem" has an excerpt on the Chinese language test paper, and it has been analyzed and done. It seems that there are no major problems with the author's writing style. Especially the most common segmentation problem, the author also handled it well. I give it a thumbs up. Then let's talk about the plot. After watching it, I didn't think it was too long. However, there are a lot of personal explanations for Zhang Xuan. I can't say that there is an absolute protagonist here, but a group of people who contribute to the aerospace industry. It can be seen that the author has already understood it, otherwise he would not write it down. Overall, it is good.

It's so rare to see another hardcore science fiction book, and it's so well written, with a tense plot, vivid characters, and bright chapters. It's really good to read. It's really hard to write hardcore science fiction online, but I also write hardcore science fiction, so I feel the same way! But I firmly believe that the spring of hardcore science fiction will definitely come. Come on! Encourage each other.

Stop by and take a look, my books also cover science fiction and hand-drawn drawings

I finally saw the big chapter in this chapter, come on!

Come on 🙂🙂

The paragraph length has been modified to make it easier to read on mobile phones.

The contradiction between the two major civilizations became increasingly intensified, and the Nuak people began to eliminate core figures in the human world. Can Ma Dongfang wake up?

It's the content I like, I'm here to learn it! Please also give me some pointers on my works

I feel like there is too much explanation in the first chapter. Editors generally like novels in the first three chapters that are simple and clear, have foreshadowing, and have conflicts. The first three chapters cannot be written in too detail. In fact, the functions of those bureaus can be written later. With more than 200,000 words, it is a bit difficult to change.

Read the whole book and leave a catch here, it's great

A great little full-length hard science fiction novel. The setting is detailed, and it can be seen that the author spent a lot of energy on the idea; the writing is brilliant, and it is guessed that the author has a lot of ink in his belly, and has a high literary foundation; the characters are distinct, and the plot is all driven by the character settings, and as a reader, there is no feeling of "detachment" throughout the whole process; the ending of the novel returns to the main theme, which is a lingering sound. A few suggestions for the author: You don't need to explain too many settings at the beginning of the article. Once new readers find it boring, there will be less data. It is best to throw out a certain introduction first, and then start with a certain conflict incident encountered by the protagonist, supplemented by good literary talent. The world setting will be discussed slowly after it attracts readers. 🙏

The writing is good, why didn't I sign the contract?

Hey, I suddenly saw the same cover as the novel I wrote here. Then I read a few more chapters and silently remarked that my brother's writing was really good. But hard science fiction is too niche, although I also write hard science fiction