Time Travel Starts from Wudang

The writing in the first few volumes is okay. Although there are some chapters that are poorly written, you can still read it with your creativity. Whether it is Tianlong or one person, the character creation and personality are all okay, and it looks good. But when you write the Zhu Xian volume later, it's hard for people to understand. It's arbitrary and gets in the way. It makes people confused. It feels like opening a new book and rewriting it, reshaping all the original characters. I suggest you read the previous volumes, but forget about Zhu Xian! The writing makes people almost give up after reading it, alas 😒

... Starting from Zhu Xian, the main plot is unclear, the plot is dull, the progress is slow, and the demand is problematic.

I've read all the content I just read a book review and it's true I have been practicing for more than ten years and I am second in the world in martial arts. I still follow the plot and deliberately weaken my strength. Poison me. Yitian itself is an old-fashioned way. The system has a low sense of presence. The whole process is following the plot to pay back so much.

I just ordered and read them all The average score for the whole story is 7/10 The writing is smooth and the characters are well-rounded The plot has a few small bugs but they are not fatal. You can see the author's progress after a few volumes Overall, is it a semi-invincible novel? As a result, it is difficult for many plots to have a sense of twists and turns (but I have read too many main stories recently and just wanted to change my taste) Eitian Tianlong Scroll has a good beginning and is unique enough to keep me watching. However, I still feel that the protagonist upgrades too quickly, which makes many of the original novels The excitement seems a bit bland The first part of the story is okay, and the restoration of several famous scenes is also very interesting, but the ending is too hasty (but considering that the original work has not been finished, the author's sudden ending is a good way to deal with it) The Zhu Xian scroll surprised me a bit. After all, it's rare to see Zhu Xian fans. I've seen a few pure invincible novels in FL before, which really made me a little bit into it. The Zhu Xian scroll in this book can only be said to be a matter of opinion. After all, the map of Zhu Xian is too big and there are too many characters. The author is in the dozens. The chapter has written a complete story with beginning and end, which is considered to be a certain skill. The current Liaozhai volume is the one that I feel is the best. The author began to express his thoughts through stories, although I don't think it is a good choice to express his thoughts in online articles. But just like eating noodles, the first few rolls made me feel like noodles with vegetables and shredded pork. Although there is no impressive taste, it can be eaten smoothly with just vegetables and a few shredded pork. The author of the latest volume started preparing braised beef noodles, but it was hard to say until the end whether the noodles would end up being too salty or too bland, making it difficult to eat. I can only say that I look forward to the author finishing this book! By the way, I think it is necessary to read the works of authors who have completed all their books (whether they are bad or masterpieces).

It's better to accept the Ming Cult. The protagonist can't be the leader. Then Zhang Wuji becomes the leader and later the emperor.

I remember that the protagonist had a task in Yitian, which required reading Taoist classics to reward the Five Elements Escape Technique. It was never completed, and after arriving in Tianlong, this task seemed to be gone.

I personally think it is quite to my taste, but the updates are too slow, because I only read it when I have collected ten or twenty chapters. It takes ten or so days to get to the chapters. Sometimes I really forget that I am still following this book, just because it is too slow and too short. So, author, you'd better update more! Otherwise I will really forget to follow your book.

I feel like if I can save Ji Xiaofu's life, so can Yang Buhui.

It looks very comfortable, author, come on.

The writing is not bad, it's not like reading a novel that is very realistic, but there are too few updates. The author needs to add more updates.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I don't even know why the protagonists who travel to the world of Yitian all accept Zhao Min? A murderous and extremely cruel princess from Meng Yuan. She imprisoned various major sects, cut off the fingers of masters of major sects, bloodbathed Shaolin, and ordered traitors to almost assassinate Zhang Sanfeng, and Wudang was almost wiped out. The protagonist of the fan novel is actually very affectionate and charming. Isn't it true that most people support the harem and only use the lower body to think about problems? Not to mention that Zhao Min was just a Mongolian princess, even if she personally ordered the massacre, as long as she was as beautiful as a flower, there might still be a lot of readers supporting the protagonist in accepting her. There are many evildoers in "The Legend of Heaven and the Dragon Slayer", and they are all punished more or less. Even the protagonist group is not immune. Zhou Zhiruo hurts Zhuer and regrets the loss of love. Xie Xun kills Kong Jian and escapes to Shaolin to atone for his sins! Only Zhao Min got away with it. Not only did he not pay the price, but he also had a good death? He never once admitted his fault for the innocent master he killed from the beginning to the end! Kongxing was a character without any black spots. He was upright and heroic, and he admired Zhang Wuji wholeheartedly. The two recognized heroes, valued them, and cherished each other. They agreed to compete with each other in martial arts in the future, but they were brutally killed and their heads were dismembered. Kongxing's head was used by Zhao Min as a chess piece in a sneak attack on Wudang. In order to gain his trust, he sent it to Wudang Mountain to attack Zhang Sanfeng! Zhang Wuji was shocked by the tragic death of Kong Xing. There are also narrow values, which in modern times do not require any hatred towards our fellow ethnic minorities. In the late Yuan era, when the conflicts between Mongolia and Han and class conflicts were all intensified as never before, there was no need to play the "repay evil with kindness" trick with them. What's more, it was said that the Mongols took no prisoners, and massacres were commonplace. When the Mongolian army occupied northern China, its genocidal methods were the worst. Almost every city has records of massacres. The Mongols also established the right of first night and four levels to humiliate and enslave the defeated. On the contrary, after Zhu Yuanzhang defeated the Mongolian Yuan Dynasty, his policy towards the Mongols was extremely generous and preferential. There is no revenge on the Mongolian Yuan. Those who surrender to the Mongolian people will be protected, and those who submit to the old Mongolian subjects will be promoted according to their talents. Only the soldiers and nobles of the Yuan Dynasty who had oppressed the Han people were punished. For someone like Zhao Min, if the main character is admitted into the palace because she is a woman and a beauty, this book would be too poisonous.

People who write fan fiction nowadays are so fucking awesome. They dare to write it even if they haven't read the original work. Please, can you do your homework before writing? Read the original work. You don't even know the order of the characters' appearance.

Are Yuanhong Sword and Demon Sword Muramasa even remotely related?

The whole order is just to see you write a eunuch book? 😤😤😤

It's not that others buy the navy, but that you really don't have any logical thinking. Let's talk about the protagonist. The protagonist can travel through time himself and is systematic. He still doesn't believe in this or that. If he travels to a high-level fairy world, does that mean he still doesn't believe in gods and monsters? Then you, the author, don't have to write anything later, so what else should you write? Also, let's talk about the Golden Light Spell that is rewarded by the system mission. The Golden Light Spell can only be used if you have magic power. As a result, you use Zhenqi to activate it. Before writing the book, did you not carefully check the division of orthodox Taoist cultivation realms, and the fantasy cultivation, immortality, martial arts, and novels for reference? Orthodox Taoist monasticism is divided into the Danding sect and the Fulu sect. Outstanding figures of the Danding sect include Lu Zu, Zhong Liquan and other Fulu sects, including Ge Hongzhenjun, Maoshan Qing sect, and Longhushan Tianshifu. 3 Fulu sects and Fulu sects Fu Shui Taoism is the general name for the Danding sect (Jindan sect) of Taoist sects that mainly use spells and other methods to treat diseases and exorcise ghosts. Danding sect, also known as "Jindan Taoism", is one of the important branches of Taoism. The Danding Sect is not an actual sect. Rather, compared to the Fulu Sect, the Taoist sects that mainly focus on alchemy and elixir seeking immortality are called "Laozi's Golden elixir Dao". They can refine internal elixirs internally and take elixirs externally. It can be said that when a golden elixir is swallowed, I know that my fate is determined by me and not by God. It's not comparable to those in the golden elixir stage in cultivation fantasy novels!

Whether it's Tianlong or one of them, it's okay to pass the time out of boredom, but Zhu Xian sincerely persuades him to quit. To be honest, the reason why Zhutianliu's novels are so popular is to make up for the regrets seen in the original novel. Tianlong alone made up for part of the regrets, and then you also took the initiative to create some plots that make people feel pity. Therefore, as a Zhutianliu novel, those two chapters are boring and can be read. They are not eye-catching and not too eye-catching. This chapter of Zhu Xian is amazing. After reading the Book of Heaven, it will be ruined immediately. Taking other people's path makes people have no way to go. Not to mention the system tasks, the protagonist has tried his best to read and learn from it, which proves that the Book of Heaven does not conflict with the system tasks. Then the war between good and evil was secretly preparing to cause trouble, and they also practiced Taoism. What was the most direct impact of the war? Life is in ruins! To cultivate the Tao, you must first cultivate your mind. If you don't cultivate yourself or your mind, how can you cultivate the Tao?

Just two dollars is enough to feed a dog. Let me just say one thing, the innate grandmaster is almost a cultivator of immortals. He can beat Cheng Kun with one move in seconds, beat Xuan Ming Er Lao and force a 50-50 split. Are you afraid that your grand master is not a master like Lei Lei and Yan Fang? Six levels of pure Yang skills, diluted dragon essence, and spiritual peach, all bought from Pinduoduo, right? How much does Pinduoduo give you, I will double it on Tmall

To be honest, The Legend of Yi Tian Slaying the Dragon is really too streamlined, and many parts that should be written in detail were not written well. The five sects went to Wudang, and the protagonist casually revealed the secret of the Yitian Sword and Dragon Slaying Knife, but no one cared about it? ! When the scandal about Xian Yutong was revealed, no one was surprised. Lao Zhang did not doubt where the protagonist got the secret. These points are really difficult to overcome. There is also the experience with Zhang Wuji and Song Qingshu later. It is too difficult to resist. The whole Yi Tian Sword and Dragon Slaying just copied the original work with a few changes, which was boring to watch.

I saw that I read it after finishing the book. It turns out that this is entering the palace🥴As soon as I looked at it, it disappeared.

It's a pity that I ended up with the poorly written routine of "Honghuangliu" at the earliest. Meng entershenji is still amazing. I've been using this routine for almost ten years.

The power system became chaotic and disconnected from the original main line. It was just a background and there was no sense of participation. Both the protagonist and the original protagonist felt like mere bystanders. It felt like the writing was not far away 😰

A first-level author? ? ? Is this a master's account or someone from outside? So nb

😌Can't I even add semen?

WOC, can a first-level author get big citations? ! This is very cool. Is this an external network master or a trumpet account of a certain master? The treatment of several 648s is a bit like a son!

I felt very boring about the Fengshen episode and didn't want to watch it…

I don't understand why so many people are complaining. Zhutianliu has so many bugs. If you want to watch something with strict logic, then don't watch Zhutianliu. Isn't Xianxia, ​​fantasy and martial arts good? How much free time do you have when you still worry about reading a novel? Isn't it normal for novels to have flaws? Seeing that the author is a newcomer, are you jealous? After reading this, I clicked into the comment area, and it was filled with trolls. I was really speechless. Although it's a bit poisonous, it's not intolerable. There are one-sided comments and some people who haven't even finished reading the book to evaluate it. Are you sick? Which author bought the trolls, or is he a deadbeat? The quality is really low. I clicked in and took a look. Most trolls don't have the habit of subscribing and don't spend money to watch it. Aren't you blushing and ashamed? ? ?

I'm asking for the October ticket. Although I don't know what essence is, there are so many people asking for it.

It's tasteless and it's a pity to throw it away. It doesn't have any passion.

It seems that the author is really isolated