Suddenly Traveled Through Time to Save the World

Wonderful! The writing is capable and the plot is vivid. With more publicity, this book should not have so few votes! Come on

The writing style of Dada is very good, and the descriptions are vivid and vivid. The first-person writing is really a test of writing skills, and Dada controls it well. Come on!

The prologue is too long, three chapters? ? ? A bit dissuaded Others, okay

To be honest, when I was reading your novel, I didn't find fault at all. I really read it seriously (›´ω`‹) I forgot that I wanted to give you some opinions, but after reading it once, I just enjoyed it. Generally speaking, the first part is more serious, and the second part is more serious. Funnier (´｡･v･｡｀) It can be seen that the author's lines are relatively large, and the author's conception is also perfect. Each chapter should have been thought out in advance, unlike me, who all thought of it on the spur of the moment. It can be seen that the author's outline should be very good. In summary, there is no problem, no matter the details. Writing, in various aspects, it is still funny and relaxed, everything is just right, there is not too much nonsense, not cumbersome, it is very easy to read, but also very interesting, especially the transition from the prologue to the main chapter, which gives me a feeling of great contrast, and it is easy for readers to get involved. I just It's good to be able to say something good about you\^O^/ Because I can't find anything bad about you. If I really want to say it, it would be to have more words and to update it faster, because this little bit is simply not enough. Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)ง I'm optimistic about you, young man 🙂