Let Me Show You What Sword Repair Is

I have read the first three chapters. The writing is good and fluent, the story settings are edible, and the overall impression is good. I have collected it. The title and introduction of the book are average, and I feel that the character setting of the male protagonist Su Nan is not very likable... The plot feels a little "rushed", with a feeling of panic, and the details are a bit lacking. Come on!

The writing is pretty good, but I feel like there's something wrong with it. Why did Sunan feel vulgar when he spoke, and why did he not keep making comebacks after being wronged in the first chapter? This is just my opinion, it may be a little wrong, but keep it up.

Although it started out as a trial that was not very clever, and at first glance it seemed full of loopholes and could not stand up to scrutiny, you made me catch a lot of laughs. In this regard, you are successful. Suggestion: You haven't written many chapters yet. You can go back and revise them. If you write too many chapters, you won't be able to go back (don't ask me how I know this). I hope you can plan your time and update regularly every day. Persistence will only make things happen if you are not a supervisor.

Clash is good, but a little rushed

1. The first three chapters have nothing to do with the title or introduction of the book. Although the conflict points are raised, they have nothing to do with swordsmanship. Personally, I feel very bad. 2. Being framed - three interrogations - being demoted - being insulted - wanting to plead one's innocence - killing someone by mistake - escaping, the content of the three chapters has been summarized in this way. Do you think there is anything new? 3. The first three chapters do not say what kind of world this is, and there is no explanation at all about the cultivation background of this world.

The writing is clear and full of emotions. If the plot conflicts in the first three chapters are more intense, it may be easier to capture the readers' hearts. Come on, collect it!

The beginning is very attractive, good, please keep updating

Collect it, save more and watch it together, come on!

It's very well written, keep up the good work! Received

Come on, keep your collection going

Come and cheer me on, your writing is great 🤭

It's a book I love so much. The author has great writing skills and great content. It's a pity that I ran out of votes 😭

Come on, come on, it's getting better and better!

From the first glance at the writing style and details, you can see that this is a thoughtful author, and the content of the article is also very attractive. I look forward to your progress and success!