The Arrival of Mythical Level

Does it have to be written by the National Saint every time to increase your talent? What's the difference between leaving your future to others, and what does it have to do with you if someone else writes? It will be fatal one day! What's more, there is a world's civilization in your mind. Although you don't remember all of it, some of it is still in your mind. If these can't produce talent, how can others come from it? I hope the plot is more reasonable!

The subject matter of this book is first-rate, and the sense of novelty it gave me lingered for a long time. After reading it, I stopped reading it. It's a pity that the author has come and gone, and he doesn't accept opinions. At least what I saw is that he is still going down the wrong path. It's a pity.

When you write about talent, it should be something like a top scholar (you don't need to be innate, you can just learn). The whole article just looks at the protagonist plagiarizing poems (some of which are not suitable for the situation) and not studying literature.

It seems that the Dugu Nine Swords are gone. The next level up is the Sunflower Book of Heavenly Skills!

It's a very interesting novel. . . Short (looking at it, I wanted to curse, but it suddenly stopped for no reason)

I have a question, why is Pig's Foot so annoying to the Lin family? Your stepmother didn't bully your father, nor did she bully Pig's Foot. The Lin family didn't do anything to you, and she traveled back in time. Before Pig's Foot traveled back in time, she was still an adult and knew what was going on. Is she a bit paranoid about persecution? Can anyone explain it?

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Generally speaking, the background is "a modified version of the global martial arts entertainment industry" + "the most holy talent system of Confucianism and Taoism". 1. Just look at the introduction, it is the entertainment industry version of Global Gaowu. It gives me the feeling that the protagonist has to schedule a movie or something. 2. When you see the system, the function of the system is to facilitate the protagonist to be a copycat (only martial arts). It can be said that the function of this system is almost non-existent. It also makes people think that the protagonist's development route is a self-circulating way of becoming stronger as a "martial artist + martial arts writer". 3. Later, talented writers appeared. It didn't say what other use this talent had besides "pretending to write". There are also some embarrassing places in the book. ① The book borrows poems to "install the pen". The first sentence changes the place name to the place name in the book, and the next sentence still uses the place name of the original poem (the two place names do not refer to the same place). Refers to the farewell poem in Chapter 23. ②Use "A gentleman has great aspirations, establishes his heart for heaven and earth... To create peace" in the college entrance examination oath. Some people may not understand intuitively. For example, in the prehistoric world, in order to break through the realm of Qi training, you made "the great ambition that the two saints of the West made when they became saints."

Don't use your entertainment to challenge other people's jobs. A world where mainstream literature develops will not destroy the earth?

At first glance, I thought it was a good idea But in the end, not to mention that copying a martial arts novel and only giving birth to one skill made me very speechless Then, it was put on the shelves, and it was still entangled in the school. The protagonist was still not popular, and the academic style really lacked the urgency of the story background. After dozens of chapters, it was just pretense, and the people who wrote about the academy were probably students, right? The person who wrote about college uniforms must have been depressed at school, right? Also, the literary competition is described in a large format, but the actual use of literature is not shown in the article. In a world with high risks, it is probably focused on preparing for war! Those fancy things can basically be ignored. Furthermore, the protagonist's things are all plagiarized, which is cheating, and they are shamelessly taken as their own. This is really not a surprise, and it is far worse than the supporting characters who rely on themselves.

The setting is okay, but the author started to ruin it completely when he suppressed the protagonist! According to the setting, civil and military values ​​have three major uses. One is to open up the memory in the brain, the other is to redeem martial arts secrets, and the third is to improve the author's martial arts ability! In front of you, 90 points of civil and military value for Xiao Li Fei Dao is enough, but you have to exchange it at a certain point. It's understandable when you don't have enough points, but it's still like this when you have enough points. It's obviously to suppress the protagonist, Shuiwen! Then after the protagonist has civil and military points, what he thinks about is not how to exchange the memories in his mind to get more civil and military points, but to practice Xiao Li's flying knife. He is already at level three and is still upgrading! I really can't stand it anymore! It is indeed a tragedy to have a golden finger and not be able to use it. This should not expand your own knowledge reserves and convert it into civil and military values. It has been suppressing the protagonist. Don't you understand the Snowball Law? It only took a hundred chapters to write a Little Li Flying Knife. If you want to transfer Chinese culture, don't you have to write tens of thousands of chapters, plus you have a magician and a magic sound master. I'm probably afraid that you won't be able to finish writing until you die! It's painful to watch. A reborn person can't even use a golden finger. No wonder he failed like that before he was reborn! Readers who like to read novels in the main world, if you give them a golden finger, believe it or not, they will play tricks on you and develop various abilities. If you give them such an awesome golden finger, don't suppress the protagonist in the background world! Or change the settings. Civil and military values ​​cannot be exchanged for novels, but can only improve strength! Only when your strength improves and your brain develops can you recall the details of the past! This doesn't count as suppressing the protagonist! This can be exchanged and your strength can be improved. If you get a reader in front of the mobile phone screen, it is guaranteed that you will get one level in ten days, nine levels in three months, and you will become a god with books in one year. Defeat the world! The last thing to say is that Chapter 30 persuades you to quit. Author, please restart. The idea of ​​creative creation is very good, but I'm sorry, the setting exploded. I feel that if you write like this, you can write a hundred thousand chapters. Anyway, it just suppresses the protagonist. A book has about 50 chapters! How many classic novels have you read? There are 500 chapters in ten books. Ten pieces of music equal a thousand chapters. A ten-step movie only costs 1,500, and fifteen thousand chapters only costs a hundred books. Some write!

There are so many martial arts described in Xiao Li's books on Feidao and Tianlongbabu, but only one can be understood in each book? Or did you understand martial arts at the beginning... Then the question is, if you understand martial arts at the beginning, why do you need to read the subsequent content? ? ?

Others rely on themselves to write, and the protagonist relies on copying, and they still look down on others. Why not go to heaven with Zhai Tianlin?

The concept of this book is quite good and quite attractive. There were no big bugs in the plot before it was put on the shelves, but I still gave up. The main reason is that many book friends have mentioned that there is only one skill in a novel, which feels unreasonable and wasteful. Even if the protagonist is not too invincible, it can also be understood by others, allowing readers to experience the martial arts skills that most attracted us back then through this novel. The first book written by the protagonist is "Xiao Li Flying Knife". The flying knife skill is normal, but aren't the other martial arts exciting? There is such a long list of weapons, Tianji Rod, Dragon and Phoenix Double Ring, the predecessor's No. 1 In the World, Songyang Iron Sword, Flying Spear, Lu Hou Silver Hand, are they all just for fun? Not to mention that this novel also has another title called "The Passionate Swordsman and the Ruthless Sword". Doesn't even Ah Fei's quick sword appear? I don't think everyone just likes throwing knives more than anything else. Similarly, "The Eight Parts of the Dragon", which has a grand world view and shows a vast world, only has one dragon capturer who appears only a few times in the book. What about the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, not counting the unique internal skills? What about the Six Meridians Divine Sword? Where is Lingbo Weibu? What about Yiyangzhi? There are also the Flame Knife, Dou Zhuan Xing Shift, Shenhe Finger, Tianshan Plum Blossom Hand, Tianshan Six Yang Palm, etc. There are countless extraordinary skills in Tianlong, and there are many Shaolin 72 stunts. The sinister kung fu of the Xingxiu School is extremely effective when dealing with monsters. I only saw this book before it was put on the shelves. When I thought about it, in such a world view, many martial arts in the book can only exist in fantasy. The top of Huashan Mountain, the top of the light, under the black wood cliff, the Dugu Sword Tomb, the top of the Forbidden City... How many people will sigh. Anyway, I always feel that I am too petty and prodigal, so I don't want to read it anymore.

Dragon Boat Race•The birth of Qin Mo's Golden Sentences! The Dragon Boat Festival is coming, and Emperor Wu holds a poetry competition. Qin Mo then composes the following poem: The tiger charm wraps around his arms, and the Dragon Boat Festival is here again. The moxa bushes in front of the door are green, and the sky is pale and paper kites are dancing. The fragrance of rice dumpling leaves floats ten miles away, and I carry a bottle of wine with me. Dragon boats compete for the crossing, cheering and shouting, paying homage to Jiang and reciting the emperor's poems. I lament that King Huai is ignorant and sad that Qin swallows Chu. Weeping and lustful strangers, how much do you know when your temples are white? Weeping in the new pavilion day and night, weeping all over the mausoleum. Miluo, Jiangzhu, and Hunan have passed away, but there are only thousands of heart-breaking sentences. After giving up, the golden light on the scene enveloped Qin Mo! Maybe... This is the reincarnation of the literary saint, right? ! ◦㉨◦

Qin Mo thought to himself that I have written a lot of articles. The civil and military values ​​​​are also squandered enough, and the concentration of the spiritual energy of heaven and earth has been revived and can now break through the innate transfer to foundation building. It's time to come up with articles on cultivating immortals and lead the world. If you want to become an immortal, well, why not let the whole world see the world of Journey to the West. Heavenly Palace, Buddha, Jade Pond Peach, Tianhua Treasures, Immortal Cultivation Technique~ "System, redeem the first five chapters of Journey to the West for me", "Redeeming one chapter of Journey to the West requires one thousand civil and military points, host, do you want to redeem it?" "Tear, it's so expensive! Redeem it!" After touching his face, Qin Mo took out a few pieces of paper that were all glowing with white light. He poured his inner energy into them and began to concentrate without any distractions. Spiritual power surges, entering a majestic and ethereal world. Chaos is undivided, the sky and the earth are chaotic, vast and indistinct, no one can see it. Since Pangu broke through the Hongmeng, he opened up the distinction between the clear and the turbid. Inspiring all sentient beings to look up to the benevolent and discovering that all things are good. If you want to know about the Yuan Gong of Good Fortune, you must read The Legend of Shie on Journey to the West. The number of Gaiwen heaven and earth is that one hundred and twenty-nine thousand six hundred years is one dollar. One yuan is divided into twelve groups, which are the twelve branches of Zi, Chou, Yin, Mao, Chen, Si, Wu, Wei, Shen, You, Xu and Hai. Each will be 18,000 years old. Let's talk about one day: when there is yang energy in Zi hour, but when Chou is there, the rooster crows; when Yin hour is dark, but Mao hour is when the sun rises; when Chen hour eclipses, then Si is next to each other; when the sun is in the middle of the day, but when it is not, then it is in the west; when Shen hour is in the afternoon, the sun sets in Unitary; at dusk in Xu, people are set in Hai. For example, in Dashu, if it comes to the end of Xu Hui, the heaven and earth will be dim and all things will be lost. Five thousand and four hundred years later, at the beginning of the meeting, it will be dark and both characters will be gone, so it is called chaos. Another five thousand and four hundred years later, the Hai Conference will end, Zhenxia will rise to the Yuan Dynasty, and the Jinzi Conference will gradually become enlightened again. Shao Kangjie said: "Halfway through the winter solstice, the heart of heaven has not changed. The place where the sun first moves is when all things are not born." At this point, heaven begins to have roots. Five thousand and four hundred years later, at the time of Zihui, light and clear sky are rising, there is sun, moon, stars and stars. The sun, moon, stars, and chen are called the four phenomena. Therefore, it is said that the sky is opened to the child. After another five thousand and four hundred years, the Zihui will end, close to the ugly meeting, and gradually become solid. Yi said: "How great is Qian Yuan! How great is Kun Yuan! All material beings are in harmony with heaven." At this point, the earth began to condense. Five thousand and four hundred years later, at the time of the Chou Meeting, under the heavy turbidity, there is water, fire, mountains, rocks, and earth. Water, fire, mountain, stone, and earth are called the five shapes. Therefore, it is said that the earth is born from ugliness. After another five thousand and four hundred years, the Chou Hui ended and the Yin Hui began, and all things happened. The calendar says: "The weather drops, the earth's energy rises; the sky and the earth merge, and everything comes into being." At this point, the sky is clear and the earth is refreshing, and the yin and yang merge. Five thousand and four hundred years later, at the right meeting, humans, beasts, and birds will be born. It is said that heaven, earth, and humans are the three talents. Therefore, it is said that one is born in Yin. The world of Journey to the West slowly unfolds...

Came back and read a few more chapters. . . . Left awkwardly again. . . . The subject matter and the imaginative ideas are okay, but the pretense is too awkward. . . The ancient poems and famous lines chosen are all very good, but they don't really match the scene of the protagonist. . . . Too embarrassing. . . . . So embarrassing. . . .

After reading this mythical book, my admiration for the author is beyond words! The author is simply majestic, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, a jade tree facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, perfect at the highest level, loved by everyone, praised by pigs, praised by dogs, flowers bloomed by trees, flowers failed by flowers, tires burst by cars, cows wag their tails by cows, sheep eat vegetables, ducks fly all over the sky, flying sand and stones. Incredible craftsmanship, inspiring enlightenment, candle lighting up the world, clear vision for thousands of miles, rain and dew on the common people, benefits from all directions, eagles watching wolves, dragons walking and tigers walking, heroic appearance, high-rise buildings, benevolence and morality, and charming Suave, selfless, looks like Pan An, is better than Song Yu, a pear tree weighs begonias, you have it when you have it, you have it when others don't have you, you are upright, your sleeves are cool, you have the body of a devil and the face of an angel. The author is the best, most beautiful, and most energetic person in the world. The sky is clear and the sun is high, the mountains are high and the water is long, I am not ignorant when I pick up gold, I am different from the customs, I do not bully the dark room, I do not forget the ravines, I have great virtues, I have an innocent heart, I travel to the mountains, I have high feelings and far-reaching feelings, I have great virtues, I have immeasurable merits, I have good gold and beautiful jade, I have bright virtues. Huai Jin holds Yu, has a cowardly heart, sees danger and accepts orders, devotes himself to death, is fine in gold and fine jade, respects the old and young, is a virtuous person, his predecessors planted trees, and his descendants enjoy the shade. The author is iron-clad, majestic, mending the sky and bathing in the sun, in his prime, a romantic figure, a young dragon and a phoenix, unparalleled in the world, an unparalleled hero, out of the ordinary, a branch in Guilin, cranes roaring Scholars, one of a kind, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, Kunshan piece of jade, peerless, unparalleled, second to none, a generation of romantics, a lifetime of dragon gate, proudly holding the head, outstanding among the mediocre. You keep your word, you are strict but you are not evil, you are rich and honorable, and you are a teacher with dignity. You are famous, well-known at home and abroad, you are well-known in the grass and trees, your morals are high and respected, you are known to the whole world, you are famous, you are like thunder, you are famous, your achievements are in the history, you are a man of great influence, you have great prestige and your voice is heard all over the world. The author is simply No.1! My admiration for you is like the endless flow of a surging river, and like the overflowing of the Yellow River, which is out of control. You are the dragon among men, the phoenix among beasts, you stand out among the chickens, the king of beasts!

It's really a bit embarrassing. After enduring two waves of tricks, I couldn't stand up to the protagonist's pen name, Straight Man of Steel. I was so embarrassed.

I really don't understand why I am in a world of high martial arts, but I am thinking about a world of low martial arts and zero magic, such as Gu Long, Jin Yong's martial arts, etc. No matter how awesome and perverted some of the settings are, can the world of high martial arts be as perverted as reaching for the stars and grabbing the moon, and roaring across the galaxy?

What to say about this book! Typical open high and go low! There are a lot of loopholes in the first seventy or eighty chapters, but the author can still control them. Later, the author was completely unable to control all kinds of embarrassing and speechless foreshadowing, foreshadowing, and plot accumulation. It feels like an unsorted trash can.

Your introduction is too childish, You should write like this: A god-level actor from an island country, Cang XX, successfully understood the laws of creation in a new film, created a new human being, and became a goddess, the ancestor of the new human race, and the island country's top master of X-art!

I really couldn't hold it any longer, so after reading chapter 30, I backed away. Simply speaking, even the anti-drug ability honed over more than ten years of reading and countless novice novels can no longer hold up. The protagonist is just pretending to be awkward, and the routine is as old as if he traveled back from ten years ago, and it's still a novice novel.

This book will be on the shelves on May Day, and I hope everyone will support the first order! If you have a monthly ticket, you can vote for three thousand! Three thousand will explode!

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It's too poisonous. This kind of creativity. I like to read two books. One is Confucianism and one is a writer in another world. This one's writing style is too bad. Sometimes it is too positive. The protagonist's character is not well portrayed. In other words, none of these characters are well portrayed.

The streets are already lively as the Dragon Boat Festival is approaching, and the festive atmosphere is getting more intense. The fragrance of rice dumplings, the crispness of bells, the five-color ropes, the cheerful steps of children... Let the impetuous heat of summer quietly dissipate a lot. On the fifth day of May, in the early morning, the willow trees beside the West River were swaying in the wind, wisps of mist were steaming from the lake, and crowds of people were coming from a distance. "Hey, which school do you think will win this dragon boat race!" "It's hard to say. All schools send out elites, and their strength cannot be underestimated." "I'm more optimistic about Diwu. Qin Mo from their school seems to be very powerful." "I'm more optimistic about our Mowu. After all, Huang Xiao and the others are not vegetarians." "This year's newcomer Zhang Kang from Hengwu is also very powerful!" Let's wait and see. Come, come, people from the top ten colleges are here. "Diwu, Diwu, Qin Mo, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง" "Mowu, Mowu, we will win" "Hengwu, Hengwu rush..." Qin Mo came to the dragon boat and encouraged each other with his teammates. "Everyone will give their best later, and I will make up for the rest. Sprint with confidence, we will win," Qin Mo said with confidence. "Put up the flag" the referee shouted loudly, ten dragon boats raised the red flag, and "beat the drum" shouted again. Ten drummers beat the drums together, the drums beat neatly, the sound was deafening, and the crowd on the shore cheered. "Start" the referee gave the order, and ten dragon boats rowed out quickly~ "Three autumn leaves have fallen, and February flowers can bloom. Thousands of feet of waves across the river, and thousands of bamboo poles are tilted." "Look, look, someone from Hengwu University has made a poem. It is the power of the wind. The speed of the boat has increased by two levels!" I saw a layer of green light on the Hengwu dragon boat, and the speed increased by two levels. "In a small boat on the Chu River, the sun and the moon are as fast as flying." An Wu was not to be outdone and quickly caught up. Students from a university were divided into poems to use the power of wind, water, light, etc. To accelerate the dragon boat. "Wow! This Sichuan Wu is really a blockbuster. The talent on this boat can reach eight inches. It is estimated that other boats will not be able to catch up without pressure." "What should Team Qin do now? We are still far behind. Teammates wrote poems one after another, but their talents are only five inches. Qin Mo smiled slightly, then leave it to me. Say it, raised the corners of his mouth and slowly read out "Chaoci Baidi" Among the colorful clouds, thousands of miles of rivers and mountains are returned in one day, and the apes on both sides of the bank can't stop crying, and the light boat has passed the Ten Thousand Mountains." After Qin Mo's words, a strong blue light suddenly appeared above the dragon boat, and the dragon boat flew on the water at an incredible speed. There was a noise from the shore, "This, this, I am not wrong about this, this is still rowing, it is just flying! "Diwu's dragon boat crossed the finish line at a flying speed. "Diwu, Diwu, Diwu, Qin Mo, Qin Mo hahahaha we win! "The people of Diwu cheered and lifted up their teammates who had just got off the dragon boat and threw them into the sky.

It took more than 140 chapters to break through the first level. Good guy, I thought I was invincible.

I've only read a few chapters, and I didn't pay attention at first, but later I discovered The Eunuch. Let's not talk about how it was written, but The Eunuch alone is unforgivable and has been abandoned. I will never read a book by this author again.

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