Uncle Jiu Praised Me for My Immortality

I feel that the author is very tangled in writing novels. He wants to arrange a heroine but is afraid of harmony. He wants to hug Uncle Jiu but wants to describe the protagonist's situation with more plot. People who read it are anxious. I didn't write the protagonist as Uncle Jiu's disciple and just eagerly passed it on. He didn't have any independent thoughts. The description of pretending was too blunt. If the supporting characters didn't assist when the protagonist was pretending, it would be very embarrassing. After all, someone has to watch it, right?

It would be great if it could be updated again

Due to the slow update of the author, our organization decided to send the author to the United States

Typos greatly affect the viewing experience. Please help me catch bugs. You can explain the chapters and sentences downstairs, or you can just mark this chapter and someone will seriously revise it. Thanks in advance, thank you! PS: A balding middle-aged man with disabled hands and short-sightedness. Although he checked each chapter several times, he still inevitably missed something (face covering).

Write less of those poisonous paragraphs. If you can't stand it, don't write if you don't know how to get along with women. Don't be like the heroine. The part with Qingqing is really too poisonous.

If you don't want a heroine, don't deliberately arrange for her to appear. If you deliberately arrange it, then say "I just want to practice by myself…" Don't you feel awkward writing it yourself?

Evaluation: The protagonist is very vulgar. The author may want to describe him as cold and handsome, devoted to Taoism. However, too many descriptions of the protagonist's appearance without matching the pursuit of Taoism immediately make the protagonist unbearably vulgar Perhaps it is to highlight the handsomeness of the protagonist. , Tingting is a pretty dog in the author's writing, and the female ghost is a pretty dog in the author's writing. The protagonist also has many ambiguous psychological descriptions of Tingting. He curses and thinks in his heart, it is really disgusting and obscene Perhaps to emphasize the protagonist's awesomeness, the author keeps writing about Uncle Jiu. You praise the protagonist and the protagonist's disdain for Qiu Sheng's literary talent is almost undisguised. No matter as a practitioner or as an elder of Qiu Sheng's literary talent, you are not a normal mentality And judging from the contact with Master Ren, you only took ten A few oceans are for the show to Uncle Jiu. The protagonist may not love money, but he definitely doesn't regard money as nothing. He doesn't mind the protagonist's desires, but this kind of forced pretending not to care is really about cultivating a chicken path I hope these insights can help the author improve his work.

It turned out to be a shocking novel, but it has been withdrawn. When the protagonist appears, he is a passerby and a supporting character. His appearance is shocking, and his spells are shocking.

There is also a person named Lin Yujiao, hahaha

It's getting more and more ugly since Shi Feiyue's appearance. The protagonist has been tolerant in every possible way. He broke into someone else's pure land and saved the protagonist once, but then he went crazy and jumped off a cliff. What the hell does it have to do with the protagonist? The protagonist is familiar with her? Do you have to keep licking?

No wonder it's so exciting, the protagonist has so many secrets and even has ghosts

The protagonist is just doing this to return merit, haha, do you want to laugh to death in Chapter 7?

Complaints, a mortal Taoist priest who has never received a golden elixir has ever seen an immortal? The fairy spirit he talks about is as funny as the beggar saying that steamed buns are more delicious than the Man-Han Banquet

Name: Chongtong (Hydra) Gender: Female Race: Demon Talent: Summon Mountain Spirits and Water Monsters Skills: Jiuyou Demon Record Bloodline: Xiangliu Jiuying Mixed Blood Weapon: Sun and Moon Golden Wheel, please explain This sun and moon golden wheel is not a prehistoric magic weapon, but the weapon of Master Guyue of Emei. Anyone who has watched the Shushan movie will know it Status: humanoid animal form Beast form: silver-blue nine-headed python standing upside down with poisonous sting Human form: wearing a phoenix crown on the head and wearing blue and purple A majestic woman in a phoenix robe Character: Cautious Introduction: A hybrid descendant of the ancient shaman Xiang Liu and the demon saint Jiuyin, who wants to purify the bloodline and become the protagonist's subordinate The picture below is the humanoid animal shape and weapon image of my supporting role, please take a look Reply to me when you arrive. Thank you {"NickName":"Kuaisolefeng","UserId":190911290}

The system is good, but the character is a bit obsessed. For the sake of merit, he ignores the death of ordinary people and happily collects merit. Aren't you afraid that your karma will burn you? Let me first explain that I am not the Holy Mother. You should understand that if you don't have the ability, it doesn't matter. After all, you are the most important. It doesn't matter if you don't want to care. You are still important, but if you have the ability to kill for the sake of merit and don't kill, let the ghosts kill and reap the rewards, isn't it an accomplice? After reading the public chapter, I haven't read it yet. I hope there will be a change in character. It doesn't require being a good person. But knowing that the plot deliberately makes zombies and ghosts kill people and then collect the merits is disgusting. It ignores the anti-human character of compatriots and pretends to be a bit stiff. (This is not a comment, this is a suggestion)

The writing behind it is not good. There is no need for the paper-man skills. The so-called cultivation of the mind does not rely on external objects. If the realm is not improved, then it is not perfect. You just used the system to advance to a higher level, and you didn't get it yourself. What's more, it's not perfect. Too bad

To be honest, when I first read the first few chapters, I thought I had found a book that suited my appetite, and I was very excited. But it didn't take long for me to be disappointed... The release of zombies depends on Uncle Jiu's strength, okay, forget it. I watched Peeves fight with Dong Xiaoyu for a long time, and finally let Dong Xiaoyu run away. Fighting zombies with Uncle Jiu, but the zombies ran away again, and they gave a bad reason not to let go of the giant ape paper man... To be so suppressed, to be honest, it was really frustrating. It's better to make the protagonist weaker at the beginning⋯⋯ I hope it won't be so frustrating later on⋯⋯

Originally, school had started, and I wanted to watch it because I wanted to gain weight, but it turned out that I couldn't gain weight 🤔

Ever since that woman came out, I felt like I was writing a lot.

No more updates 😐

If you want to write about a heroine, write it well. Don't hesitate to start and stop writing a little bit at the suggestion of a few stupid anti-fans. The most taboo thing about writing a book is to follow the ideas of the anti-fans randomly. Your book will never satisfy someone's ideas. If it is messed up, it will become different and end up being cool.