Empty City Strategy: the Decisive Battle in Netherworld Valley

Collected, take a look! The writing is very good! Come on! Welcome to visit us again!

I suggest you change the paragraphs. The reading experience is too bad.

It is better to have shorter paragraphs in online articles, which are slightly different from those in publications.

The novel is okay. I would like to give you a suggestion: change the title and pay attention to the paragraphing.

Good writing! Come on! Collected, take a look! Keep it up, keep an eye on you! Welcome to visit us again!

Collected it and read it slowly. Come on!

The writing is so good~ I will keep up with the updates, keep up the good work

It reminds me of the feeling of watching Go Boy when I was a child. The core of the article is really rare, but the writing is different and exciting.

It's too late to meet, and it's hard to find a close friend. Come on together!

It's well written. You can change the paragraphs. The paragraphs are too long and seem a bit laborious.

The writing is good, keep up the good work, my dear, I have already cast a vote.

Writing alone is lonely, come on!

I need to work harder on my ability to write stories.

Everyone, the paragraphs have been adjusted to make it easier for everyone to read 🙏

Completed. Thank you for your support over the past month 🙏🙏

Come on, code words 😁 Thank you for supporting "Sweet Wine Reunion"

The writing is good, but the descriptions are a bit undetailed.

The writing and style are fine, but why is it called Empty City Plan 2? One more thing to add.

The writing is really good. I like this style of writing.

Come on, it's so well written in capital letters (●°u°●)​". It's just that the name is a bit weird

I finished the book so quickly🤭I am still burning the midnight oil every day😒

There's nothing to say about the writing style, it's just that there are too many words and it's uncomfortable to read…

One story, one world, come on

Very well written. Collected. Made a mark. It has the charm of traditional martial arts. As far as I'm concerned, I think the paragraph is just right. After all, if the meaning is expressed completely, it would be too fragmented if it were cut bluntly. Currently, Xianxia is more popular. It is more relaxed and the language is relatively vernacular, which is much more enjoyable. As for martial arts, it is more stable and needs to be carefully crafted. Adapt or persist depends on what you pursue. Come on＾0＾~

Collected it, the writing is very good. There are few martial arts nowadays, there are even fewer traditional martial arts, and there are even fewer well-written martial arts. I also write about martial arts, but I couldn't even name the book well, hahaha

The book is closed. Nowadays, martial arts is considered unpopular and it is difficult to become popular. However, the writing style is very good. I feel very comfortable when reading the text. The artistic conception and writing are beautiful, but some of the paragraphs are too long and make it tiring to read.