Hongmeng Lintian

The length of the dialogue should be shortened, the essence should be refined, and it should be divided into more paragraphs. It doesn't matter if the routines are the same. The key is to write superbly and be better than others. Write more and read more, and take your time. The quality of the book is not important, but the completion of the book is the most important. Come on

I have read the first three chapters. The writing is good and fluent. The story setting is relatively average. The overall impression is okay and edible. However, the interweaving of memories and reality in the first three chapters is a bit strange and feels a bit confusing. Also, there are too many names of characters in the opening scene. I didn't count them carefully. I'm afraid there are nearly ten? I feel like I can't remember it at all. The image of the protagonist is also a bit weak. The dialogue is also a problem and needs to be streamlined... Come on, come on

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How should I put this? The writing is relatively good, but it doesn't feel addictive. Because there are too many routines in this kind of writing, although some different things are added to it, it is just a change of the soup without changing the medicine. It would be very difficult for this book to become popular.

Since some book friends have some misunderstandings about the content of this work, I would like to post an explanation here. ① In the book, I use a lot of space to describe Fatty. It is obvious that he is not just a supporting actor. Shen Heng and Chu Menglin will continue to appear later. Chu Menglin is the heroine, but not Xiao Chen's spouse. These three people have corresponding character models in reality, and many of their characters are based on the characters of the three people in reality. ②Why was the Xiao Mansion exterminated? The reason is that the Brahma Gate came for opportunity, and the Xiao Mansion only spread a secret, but the Xiao Mansion did not find this opportunity. And Brahma Sect came to ask for an opportunity. No matter how Xiao Mansion explained, Brahma Sect would not believe it, because the information they got was that Xiao Mansion had already found this opportunity. Since the Xiao Mansion cannot hand it over, it is normal for the Brahma Sect to exterminate the clan. ③ As for whether this article is a routine article, I can only say that the one who knows the truth will clarify himself. I admit that there are some routines here, because our level is not good enough, and some places can only be elicited using common routines. But I can guarantee that the subsequent installation of 13 is completely wrong. As mentioned above, Xiao Chen himself did not want to enter the sect, and the purpose of entering the sect was not to pretend to be stupid. Fatty had already explained that they only entered the sect to improve themselves quickly, and the three of them were only outer disciples. The plot in the future will not revolve around the sect in a big way, but will mainly be written around the three of them. Maybe it does seem like a short story now, but because there are 6,000+ updates every day, some plots cannot be released on that day. We will have a very major turning point in the mid-term. The real main plot has not yet entered, and the exciting part of the entire book is still far away from this. ④ Regarding the author's writing style, I feel that I can publish this book because I feel it is okay, and the comments from book friends are very important opinions. ⑤ If you have any questions, you can ask me directly in the book circle and I will answer them. If you have reasonable and objective opinions or suggestions, you can also comment directly. Please don't just complain when you come up and become a brainless keyboard warrior. Thank you everyone🙏🙏

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The writing is good, but the words are a bit sparse, although I don't have many. 🤭 Come on ✊🙏🤝

Immature suggestions are for reference only. Segmentation! It must be divided into paragraphs. Failure to divide the text into paragraphs for mobile phone reading will affect reading. Modify the introduction. Just the background introduction will not interest readers.

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Come on, come on, the writing is very good