Nightmare Arcade

Keep fattening, then suddenly it's over, let's start slaughtering it

Come on, I finally found the infinite flow of Nightmare Space. I hope there are more props and skills, and there are not so many exclamation points. . .

This is a more mature arcade unlimited novel than Ace Evolution. It's a pity that it was released too late, and even the popularity of unlimited fiction has passed. Otherwise, many people would love to read it!

Does the author stop writing books? It's such a pity. It would be better if the author writes an infinite stream and writes a sequel to the final evolution.

Start reading from Chapter 3. I feel good. I don't know why I didn't sign the contract? . . Much better than many infinite novels

Come on, now I am looking for new unlimited data streaming, and I have almost seen all the old ones.

Why isn't there Chapter 11 or 12?

If nothing else, just add some gas.

What can I say about the recent chapters? For a new author, the writing is pretty good, but I feel that it lacks some foreshadowing and plots, and the depth is a bit lacking. It would be better to delve deeper into the plot and write more branch lines. It feels like the copy ended before it was developed very much. Generally speaking, the daily description of the plot world is not enough. , The battle description is not exciting enough, and there is too little foreshadowing. When fighting the female boss, it feels like it is ghs, but it is obviously interesting, but the fighting feeling is not so good. When it comes to the male boss, the battle description is not as interesting as fighting the female boss. It is recommended that there be more foreshadowing in the plot scenes, and more descriptions of side tasks and the process of the protagonist obtaining information to attack the boss. As for the description of the battle, try to write it well and focus on learning more.

Wow, arcade, my favorite theme in the past

Don't make all the boxes that burst out silver-white. Make them white, light blue, dark blue, silver, gold, and dark gold. In addition, the attributes of your golden equipment are too poor. It is recommended to change them. In the early stage of equipment, it is recommended not to have too good equipment. It will be difficult to write in the later stage. This newbie copy is regarded as a bonus. Bureau, forget it if you give it better, but the attributes of your golden equipment must be changed. In addition, the skill bar is too few. It is recommended that the skills can be solidified later (it will not occupy the skill bar after mastering it) and the advanced skills are similar to the skill tree (the skill tree can evolve from one skill to upgrade many skills). The writing style is okay, but there are still two points to note. One is that these pictures are a bit redundant, be careful not to enter the small dark room. The other is that the details are a bit poor. Although they are all minor flaws, they are easy to collapse in the later stage. I hope to think more about the details. With your writing style, you are quite suitable for writing novels. I also wanted to write this kind of novel before, and I also had many ideas, but I was too lazy to write.

I just read two chapters, and I almost thought that Maduki was writing a sequel, but when I quit, I found out that it was not the case. To be honest, the book written by Maduki is much better if it doesn't collapse later. As for the current book by Maduki, I read more than a dozen pictures and couldn't understand what it was about.

I've been writing well recently, come on, everything is difficult at the beginning, and it's hard for a new author to become popular. Treat your first novel as an exercise and a hobby. If you sign a contract and publish it, it will be an unexpected surprise.

I asked you to mind your own business and saved your wolf, now you are being punished

Four votes are given every day. Come on, there are not many books of this type.

Speechless. My vote for you every day is in vain.

If I forget correctly, there are two recommendation tickets per day.

Will you write Seven Days to Die and Ark?