Isn't It Better to Just Be Quiet and Be an Ordinary Person?

I can give this book a comprehensive evaluation of 64 points. Although overall it's pretty good, there are still problems. [Title]: 7 points. The title is quite attractive in a nutshell, but it doesn't seem to fit the content of the article very well. The final analysis is that the title should be an invincible article, but the content of the article cannot be seen to be related to invincible. [Introduction]: 4 points. The introduction is a bit lengthy and feels confusing. Although the overall context is pretty good, this introduction can only be said to be an extension of the title, and it cannot be said to be a very good introduction. [Writing]: 7 points. The writing style is average. I can only say that it is written relatively smoothly, but it cannot be said to be too attractive. Although there are generalizations about the big scenes, in the end there are not enough details and they are too loose. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is not clear enough, so he is not very attractive. [Plot]: 7 points. The plot has a lot of foreshadowing, and the overall layout is pretty good. But the general plot and layout are relatively old-fashioned, and the beginning reminded me of The Wise Man's Grandson. After all, the plots of this kind of Long Aotian are all the same, and it is difficult to make big innovations. [Comprehensive perception]: 7 points. Since I quite like this kind of plot and setting, and the author's writing style is pretty good, and the title also adds some points, the overall impression is pretty good. In summary, I hope the author will continue to work hard and it would be great if he could change the details. Come on!

This cover is so awesome 😂

I didn't find the feeling in the previous part. The writing is a bit messy and the protagonist's personality is unclear. Please be patient and read on 🙂

Okay, the beginning is a bit noisy and the writing is average. Overall, there is a lot of room for improvement. Come on! (Look forward to commenting)

Collected, let's work together! 🌹🌹🌹

It has realistic colors and a good writing angle. It can be seen that Dada is a person who is good at observing life! The rhythm and everything are well grasped, but the description of the environment is a bit lacking. Come on! Let's work together!

It feels good, a bit humorous, which is good. It has been added to the bookshelf and I will keep writing until it reaches 500,000 yuan. I will read it again.

Very nice, I'll save it and read it later! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

Is this a different kind of cultivation? The beginning is quite interesting. Give me some advice! The best word count for each chapter is 2,000 words.

I'm making great progress in my writing every day, keep up the good work 🤝

Very well written, thank you to the author!

The writing is good, it's humorous and has a sense of fantasy, come on

It's very well written. Please support me and come on 🙂😁

New artist, new work, don't comment if you don't like it Be more tolerant and less blaming Give more guidance and scold less

The author's writing and plot are excellent, worth reading👍

Read two chapters. There is nothing poisonous about the story so far. But. I saw several typos in just two chapters. One part is understandable, but two or three parts are the author's problem. Don't rush to send it out immediately after writing it. It is recommended that the author check it himself before publishing the article.

It makes people want to read it. It proves that the writing is good. Keep working hard. It has been collected. By the way, I can use your precious place to promote my own book 😁

After reading 5 chapters, I will briefly describe my feelings. Please forgive me for any inappropriate comments 1. The setting is very interesting, and it feels like the style of a cultivation chat group that favors light novels 2. The overall look and feel is very smooth, and the story unfolds very naturally 3. Because of style issues, I will make a small suggestion. There are many jokes, but they are not new. It is relaxed enough, but not funny enough. Maybe you can consider more design 4. Come on