Qi Ling Farming Notes

In this book, I couldn't stand it after reading the first few hundred chapters. The author is a new writer. Do you know that the most important thing in writing a novel is not the general outline, but that it must be realistic? You are untrue. Aren't you trying to undermine other people's values ​​and worldview? It's smelly and long, all of them are dialogue narratives, and my head is getting big... I'm confused. It's very hard to watch,... I won't talk about the rhythm,... It's very Mary Sue-like in writing, I won't talk about Su, but it's actually nothing, it's well written, and it's pretty good to watch. I'm happy to watch😁... But the problem is that I can't force a Mary Sue? ? ? The author should consider the background era... Can you still understand the background era you wrote? ? Go read more books by the ancients. The ancient authors are also very good. Really, then it was the era when paper could be made, and the economy was developing very fast... How could there still be this kind of aunt who is dumber and smarter than you? , Aunts and aunts, aren't they smart? No, they are smart, and after all they have eaten more salt than you for decades... They have eyes and ears, do you think they can't see or listen... It's really... Yaxi, I suggest that minors should not watch these things first, it is not conducive to the development of world values... Because it is not true. , And many of the values ​​in it are not necessarily correct. After all, the storyline is all fabricated. Don't think that it will happen in real life... I didn't know there were so many top quality things... Don't be so casual when writing about passersby... They also have souls. Otherwise, you would think that the heroines and male protagonists in fast-transportation novels are all dressed as dogs, Xiba? ? , when writing a story, you must have a soul when you write it! ! ! Aren't the comings and goings of time-travel novels just like those routines? Isn't it written about looking at people? The character setting is monotonous, and the heroine has no shining points. This is not about writing stories for the sake of writing stories. The important thing is that you have to shape the characters and themes. Just like painting, the plot serves the shaping of the characters. Only with the theme can the meaning of painting come into being. The character creation of the story was not successful. I still haven't figured out who the characters are... But there are still good aspects. If you like to write about making a fortune through painting, you can barely read it if you are bored. Well, at least I can see the painting part clearly, hahahaha, and then I won't talk about the other parts... I seriously suspect that the author is a social worker who has just graduated from an art degree. He is young and writes articles to earn some pocket money. ... That is, this meal is not very good... I am too young and have not enough experience... This book is really too stupid (the author has nothing to do with it)... It doesn't matter if I am stupid. Is it okay if I go back and refer to other excellent authors? . Find the one you think you can watch. It has nothing to do with whether it is recommended or not... Then look forward to the future. If nothing else, you can still use your imagination. It would be nice to improve all aspects. What's more important is feelings, feelings, and contagiousness. If the contagiousness is not strong, anything you say will be in vain!

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One bleeder walked around, two bleeders were lying in the pot, three bleeders were dipped in sauce, four bleeders were cooked into skewers, five bleeders were in a row, and six bleeders were roasting lamb legs. . .

Although he is a bit more articulate, he still has a cruel heart, and the most cruel people are usually not the ones who speak evil words. You have a kind heart and good intentions, you just need someone to truly understand you.

Cuteness is justice, cuteness is king. You are a cute and cute foodie, how can you not be liked by others?

Pengcheng's Sanxiao pot requires careful selection of materials and fine workmanship, requiring several processing procedures. There are three kinds of stewed meat, crispy meat, meatballs, steamed skin residue, fried tofu and fried potatoes in the three pots. It is cooked in a large pot and added with a little spinach, garlic sprouts and other green vegetables. Delicious.

La la la, I'm here to see the farming. The new book is as good as ever. I like it. Come on💪

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Nice. The author writes really well. I like this kind of slow-paced writing the best. The rhythm was so exciting and fast that I couldn't react. Maybe my brain is not enough. Ha ha ha ha!

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Let you not code words, let you not code words, the little whip is coming.

Riwan's bleating is the most fragrant. It can be fried or boiled 😍

Didi, dear, here I come.