Immortal Lord's Peasant Girl Apprentice

I said that I can't write it anymore. I will update it at 12 noon tomorrow on time. I will make up for what I owe slowly.

The names of the protagonist and supporting characters are too weird, right?

The novel is really well written. However, every time the eldest sister of the heroine appears, there must be an accompanying sentence: "The personality of the eldest sister is as sharp as a knife but with a soft heart." Sister, you have been chanted by Lou Xing N and NN times, and then NN and NNN times. The knife in your mouth has long been blunted, and this heart has been tempered into a stainless steel heart. I am baffled by how a great master who can write books of a high standard can fall into the trap of "a sharp mouth and a tofu heart" and cannot get out of it? ? ? Alas, if Mr. Lou sees this comment, please don't be angry. I am just talking and have no other meaning at all. I am a real person.

The imagination is good, and the subject matter is okay, but Golden Finger is too big and too smooth. It feels like a running account, and it could be written in more detail. The portrayal should be fuller and try harder.