Xiaoyaotiandike

This book is a big one, but the title and introduction are enough to make it stand out. I have just read a few chapters, and the world view is still very clear. The purpose of the protagonist is also very clear. The writing is good and the paragraphs are comfortable. Like and support!

I feel like the writing is very good, keep up the good work!

The content is quite interesting, support it

1. The first shortcoming is that there are really no typos. Sometimes some words are added to a sentence, which makes it difficult to read. It is recommended that the author correct the mistakes before publishing. 2. The introduction is good, the characters are vividly described, and the conflict points are also remarkable. 3. The number of words in the first chapter is too small, and some paragraphs are a bit too long, which can be corrected. 4. In the first chapter, I personally felt that the monologue in front of my father's grave was inappropriate. The entire monologue lacked a sense of immersion.

It's very well written, keep up the good work!

Keep up the style, come on!

Collected, I will continue to read it for a long time, come on

The writing is very good, and you can't tell that he is a newbie. The author is actually a trumpet, right?

Not bad, I decided to collect it, take your time and read it, come on! Welcome to visit us again!

Because in the new book issue, red envelopes are given out to refresh the data.

Collect it! Come on 👍

Xiaoyao Tiandi, this name is naturally good, but it makes me feel that the main plot is unclear. If it is for Xiaoyao, it may be worse. Fortunately, you have prepared enough, I hope you can achieve something!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~