Douluo Dalu: The White Armored Sacred Dragon

In the first chapter, I was persuaded to quit. The Holy Dragon Sect and Meng Yiran's family actually asked the Wuhun Palace to awaken. It made me laugh. The Wuhun Palace is really popular and has the only channel to awaken the martial arts🐶 The specially subscribed chapter should be given to the author. Goodbye

It was disgusting to see Bai Shengxin temporarily withdraw from the show, so I gave up. I have been enduring it since the 200th chapter, thinking that the author might be better off in the future. After all, writing is not easy, but as a result, it has become more and more excessive after more than 300 chapters. All sorts of mindless attempts to send girls, but the result is that they still refuse to accept them. Adding an unpleasant girl from Ge Yi was a failure. Although he corrected it in time and gave it to Xieyue, the author has not learned his lesson. In addition, the protagonist's personality is similar to that of schizophrenia. He must be gentle and affectionate, cold and ruthless, dedicated and indecisive??? Another point is that in the beginning, it was a cute and lengthy article about male and female appearance, so I tolerated it. Later, I just treated the cross-dressing as a joke, but what about the style of painting when defeating the three titled Douluo of the Soul Destroying Cult? Did the author hire a ghostwriter? If I hadn't liked the martial arts setting and character setting at the beginning, I would have given up long ago. I would like to give you some advice. Anyway, the author has written that the protagonist is about to become a god, and he can't write more chapters. Stop writing about random things that ruin his character. Bai Shengxin is really disgusting. Can the author write original characters with a little more charisma? Wouldn't you be upset if the "son" and "daughter" you wrote are disliked and disliked by others? It's almost finished. Let's fix the previous chapters and save up some character to gain some popularity for the next one. Of course, it's just a suggestion. The author has his or her own judgment whether to listen or not. Even if you come to scold me, I still want to say it. After all, I have subscribed until now, and I should have the right to express my feelings in the discussion post.

Wuhun Palace's action to eradicate the genius was well written, because Bibi Dong at this stage was originally a mad woman. Her idea was probably to unify Douluo Continent if she could, and if she couldn't unify, she would destroy Wuhun Palace. The protagonist probably wanted to protect herself between Tang San and Bibi Dong. Letting the Holy Dragon Sect retire like the Haotian Sect is probably too good a thought. The reason why the Haotian Sect can retire smoothly is because at that time Qianxun Ji died and the Wuhun Palace had no leader. Bibi Dong's strength and prestige were not enough to convince the crowd. Qian Daoliu was afraid of Tang Chen and did not dare to take action easily. Even if the protagonist wanted to retire, the Wuhun Palace would not respond. In response, the Tiandou Empire, Star Luo Empire, and some other sects probably won't agree. We're about to start. You don't stand in line and you want to run away. If the Holy Dragon Sect wants to retreat, it has to face the Wuhun Palace at the first level, while the other sects will probably just sit back and watch. Being destroyed by the Wuhun Palace can be used to eliminate the Wuhun. With the power of the temple, if it is not destroyed, you can continue to attract hatred and become cannon fodder... Speaking of this, I really don't know what other protagonists in fan fiction think. The time travel comes with a plug-in and awakens the martial soul without any background. I don't know that Mu Xiu is bound to be destroyed by Lin Feng.

I want to ask, why do all your hundred thousand year soul rings and soul bones only have one soul skill? I was poisoned on the spot

At the beginning of meeting that Ge, the protagonist is like a fool. You don't take your own woman, but take someone you met less than three days ago. He is indecisive, womanly, and likes to meddle in other people's business. To be honest, if you don't have a good grandfather, he is completely useless, has no skills, and has a lot of nonsense. He is also a single heroine, and he likes to mess with women. I am speechless...

The author's setting of the protagonist's skills is very good. After all, Tang San's previous life did not have skills like Xuantian Gong for less than 10,000 years in human history. The soul beasts in Douluo Continent only started after 10,000 years. How could people in Douluo Continent still use the most basic meditation method? It can only be said that it is because of martial arts. The reason why Douluo Dalu's exercises are not as accessible to everyone as Tang San's Xuantian Technique is because they are originally two systems. This is the benefit of the sect's power. Not only do you have various resources for cultivation, but you also have the teachings of famous teachers, and even the exercises are prepared for you.

Fortunately, I haven't seen the back yet. It's really disgusting to send a girl away.

Meng Yiran's only impression as the heroine is that she is a kissing madman (probably because of her obsession with kissing Tang San in the original work). Generally speaking, this character cannot support the heroine. The writing of Bibi Dong and her daughter is quite interesting, but it is a pity that it is too disgusting to look at. If you are sure that you want to write a single heroine, don't get involved too much. And other female characters, the worst thing is to have an affair with a bunch of female characters and then refuse to accept them. It is unbearable to look at forcing CP to give girls away (online novels are super poisonous, you can not love them but don't just find someone to give them away. Killing girls is better than giving them away. If you really don't want to accept them, you can find a reason to let the girl leave). . . Finally, there is the male protagonist. He is simply a schizophrenic. He is one of the weirdest characters. He is a bitch who forces himself to be cute. He can be aloof, cute, cross-dressing, and murderous. Forgive me for my poor imagination, I really can't figure out what this male protagonist looks like. If you really want to write about a straight man, please go and watch "Global Elf Era" (single female protagonist) to see what it means to be a steely straight man who can flirt with girls. You forcefully flirt with girls and abstain from sexual intercourse. It's really better to write about a stallion. To be honest, if the martial arts setting of this book is not good, I would have given up long ago. In fact, this novel still has a lot of room for improvement, but it is a pity that the author's writing skills cannot support it. I hope there will be a good ending. After all, fan creation is really for love, and there is not much that can be read. Although this book is quite poisonous, there is still something to read. Anyway, cheers for the author!

It was pretty good at first, but because of what kind of grass she used, she grew into a transvestite. Such a domineering martial spirit was blinded in vain. It was full of a sense of disobedience.

Forget about writing about Ge Yi, I gave her away later. . . .