I'm Really Not a Child of Luck

I think this book is okay. The writing is good, the setting is good, and it is relatively novel. Except for the luck halo, which has a small bug that makes no sense, everything else is pretty good (why are there so many people complaining about it... There are basically no good reviews in the book review area...) The description is also quite smooth, but I feel that Shenxiao Holy Lord is a bit OOC (after all, he has lived for so long, this character is emmm). Overall, it is completely OK to make a cool article. Of course, this update. . . ps: I think the protagonist is a bit too invincible, with his clones beating the audience, all kinds of opportunities, invincible skills and so on. If the plot doesn't have any ups and downs, it would be boring to watch too much, right? I hope there will be some twists and turns later.

It's a good book that makes me want to read it. This book is so delicious! I finally read the latest chapter 24 hours a day. This book is a light-hearted fantasy novel, and the various characters are particularly vivid and interesting. Although the story is told in a joke, the philosophy of life is always revealed inadvertently after laughing. The most worrying thing about fantasy novels for a ten-year-old bookworm is the plot of the dungeon. In the past, the dungeon of Cultivation of Immortality was about fighting monsters and upgrading. Although it was thrilling and exciting, it was boring and boring, and you kept opening the dungeon. After reading too much, it suddenly stopped being interesting. This book goes straight to Huanglong. It is very enjoyable to watch. It is humorous to enter the dungeon, funny to pass the level, funny to fight monsters, surprise equipment, pretentiousness depends on appearance, luck is a glimpse of immortality, the sound of the fairy's fart can make you become a fairy even if you are not a genius. There are also highlights in the character creation: Li Qingcang and Chu Longhe are two bad old men who are very bad. They can turn into barbecued meat when they are carved, and they can keep their pants on when they are bad. Li Lian'er gave a silly look and fixed the potted spiritual plant, which is cute and cute.                                                                                                                                                                                                              Jin Yu is pure and straight and does not beat around the bush, but is stubborn and arrogant and often gets hurt. Song Fugui is sweet and immortal, and has no trace of nobleness.       ，，                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       It seems that the "Shenxiao Thunder Emperor Sutra" has improved a lot...

After reading a hundred chapters, I decided to order them all. This is still a relatively risky move. According to the rules of this kind of works, this kind of pleasant, leisurely and joyful fairy tales still have to rely on some book reviews and chapters to provide some inspiration. After all, even a cartoonist has a studio to conceive the plot. I think what limits the development of this type of novel is the "activity" of readers. The number of readers doesn't have to be many but they must be active. As long as the fans are active enough, becoming popular is just an "opportunity". Over time, if it is passed on and passed on, you can slowly and unknowingly turn it into a masterpiece. Based on the hundred chapters I have read so far, I am quite optimistic about the author. The full and immersive characters and the humorous and nonsensical plot are particularly useful to me who like "sand sculpture" culture, but it is still lacking in terms of world view structure. Those born in the 90s and 00s who are accustomed to being bombarded by Internet information flow will not be satisfied with a simple and miniature world. After all, even the most humorous people cannot tell millions of words of interesting and high-quality jokes if they just tell jokes. This work has the potential to become a work with a complete world view. The unique "du stone" system accounts for a large proportion compared to novels of the same type. It has the potential to create "memes" to promote externally (Mianxiao Jiuquan is enough to become a meme but requires plural memes). The setting of "the ore is poisonous" is also a rather profound foreshadowing that can be used to make a big fuss. Currently, the protagonist is still walking in a small area of ​​the Eastern Wasteland map. There are also larger sections, ancient battlefields of gods and even high worlds and low worlds for the author to play. Entertainment and comedy need to be moderate. The chapters I have seen so far are all very interesting, but a bit "too funny". I am afraid that one day the author's resources will not be so sufficient and it will not be able to create an atmosphere like watching a joke. Moderately gentle and interspersed with funny plots like jokes will be enough to be worthy of the essay and extend the life of the work. I'm still afraid of the author's failure, but I will support him. If there is a fan card one day, give me one 🤭

After reading dozens of chapters, let's talk about the two biggest poisonous points at the beginning. The Li family's country has no strength and no big economy. It is impossible to build a country. Shopkeepers everywhere are richer and more powerful than them. How is that possible? The second point is that as a prince, he has a reputation for bad luck, and others just ignore him when they see him, but no one in the city knows him? Well, in the end, it's all about the character's wisdom throughout the story… For those of you who have just started reading, you can read it for fun.

After reading it, I would like to give you some suggestions: 1. The power system and plug-in system are set up well, and don't lose control. 2. Don't break away from the theme of mascots and watching people's luck. I have read a lot about cultivating immortals and cultivating Taoism, and this book is not missing. I read this book just for the introduction and subject matter. 3. You can read "Xiaoyao Landlord (Eternal Fire)" (yes, there is no zigzag, Eternal Fire is the vest after the landlord is banned). The theme of this book is also an intuitive view of people's luck. It is well written and I have been following it, although it was later banned. Personally, I think being banned is due to many reasons, including driving too fast, being involved in corruption, and I don't know if it's because I know the reason for being banned. I think the last part is because the power system is broken, and it's beside the point. To be honest, if I had continued writing like that, I would have given up even if it wasn't blocked. 4. Give me some encouragement. The book is very beautiful, the subject matter is good, and I like the style. To be honest, I haven't found a second book with this subject matter before I discovered this book after Xiaoyao Landlord was banned. It is inevitable that newcomers will not get good grades. There are too many books with 400,000 words that are not on the shelves. There are also 180,000 words with 1,100+ recommendation votes in Cute Foodie's book list. As for the word count, it doesn't have everything, but it's definitely better than it is now. Anyway, come on Oli! Oh, by the way, one person will receive all the blood books!

I just want to say, can we settle on a female protagonist? I find that these male protagonists are so handsome now that they have no companions. They are even afraid of women when they see them. I really don't know what to say. Am I too vulgar?

Oh my god, this writing poisons me.

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Very good. The male protagonist is handsome, so I feel like I can relate to him.

Funny can be funny, but this book gave me the feeling that it was written too deliberately for the sake of being funny. Life is not easy for everyone in real life. I can understand that reading novels is about being relaxed and happy. After all, they are all the same, but I think the most basic logic should be normal. After all, it is a world of immortality, and it cannot be so happy all the time. Also, do most of today's light-hearted novels like to write male protagonists with stable characters? This is not a situation like Li Changshou's in a world of great changes, where a slight mistake could lead to death. After all, Shen Tian is also a holy son of the sky, and the Holy Lord is not weak. Unless he is a life and death enemy, no one will deliberately harm him. Besides, Shen Tian himself is very strong, and he has so many powerful magic weapons. There is no need to be too panicked in various situations. He is too cautious. I feel like Shen Tian is no longer stable, but cowardly.

The author definitely did not live 10 years ago! I want to write something light and funny! Don't forget about the supporting characters!

ㅤㅤ Discussion, how did African chiefs sneak into Europe? This is the story of an unlucky guy who turned black in his hall, and through luck and opportunity, he escaped from joining the European Union and became a son of luck in the eyes of everyone, and was extremely thanked. (⸍ꔷ͈ᗄꔷ͈⸌)O ㅤㅤ After the original body went crazy and passed away 88 times, Shen Yun who came through was really unhappy. Without him, the original body would be too unlucky! ㅤㅤAlthough he is the 13th prince of Donghuang Dayan, his mother and concubine died in childbirth, his father did not want to see him, his birds drowned, his flowers were pulled out, his school collapsed, and he became possessed eighty-eight times... He was an unlucky man! Everyone in the palace avoided him! ㅤㅤ Fortunately, the gold finger will arrive in real time! ㅤㅤThis face is young and beautiful at only 16 years old, extremely handsome and extremely handsome! ㅤㅤWith these eyes, you can see the various halos of luck behind everyone's heads, as well as the opportunities that others will get! ㅤㅤThis unlucky guy can get opportunities by pointing others out, improve each other's luck, and even enjoy it for free or even for a fee! ㅤㅤ From then on, Shen Yun embarked on the path of being the number one koi star in the world of cultivation! ㅤㅤ Chen Yun: Original body? Exist? I thought about it, am I inheriting your luck? ㅤㅤThe novel is very funny. I suspected many times that the author planned to laugh me to death and then inherit my luck. (Serious)

The setting is very interesting, but the writing of the plot is not interesting enough or "without spirituality". The plot development itself is interesting, but there is no writing that can set off the plot. This is my impression after reading about ten chapters, and I hope it can be improved in the future. Also, I hope that the author will not write too straight men when it comes to love scenes. I hope that they will be as detailed as possible. After all, my favorite dramas are love dramas. I have not read much online articles recently because of this influence. Once you join the party, you will earn as much as the sea and the harem will be like dust. The author of Qidian writes too straight and the love scenes are not interesting at all. However, on the contrary, the author of Qidian writes about brotherhood one by one. I don't know which line is wrong.

Author, please update. I won't update spanking anymore.

The concept of the protagonist of this book is very to my liking. I would like to encourage you with a monthly pass and 5 recommendations! Big cheers for the author! ! ! 🙏🙏

I'm so drunk... This author is good except for the slow updates. I just hope there won't be bad endings and eunuchs~

I hope the author will update it soon. I'm dying of waiting.

It's quite nice. It means a reward of 1600.

This style of writing is so beautiful, it makes people feel comfortable and want to laugh. It is really a breath of fresh air in the current fantasy cultivation world. Big boost for the author! 👍

It's pretty good. From the perspective of refreshing writing, it is updated once a day... Personally, I feel that the update frequency is a bit low, not to mention that this is a newly opened book. I hope it can burst out occasionally.

It's really good-looking. I hope the author works hard and will become a platinum master. Support you.

It's so slow. Can the author update it once a day?

The writing is passable, with a focus on light humor. There is really no need to describe the fights in detail in this type of novel, as it would be cumbersome and boring. The training system is slightly lacking, and the level divisions are rather unclear. As a light novel, it's pretty good. The subsequent plot also explains the foreshadowing of the previous article, but the update is slower. If you have never read such novels about immortality, it is worth reading.

Xiaobai's writing is very enjoyable, but it can't be read with brains or logic.

The novel is very interesting, light-hearted and humorous, and the most important thing is that it is handsome, which is enough. However, it is a bit slow and not enjoyable to read.

A friendly reminder, the front of this book is a bit retro. But since this book is a bit funny, it's not a problem.

It doesn't look good, the currency is collapsing too fast. If you like a bit of logic, don't read it.

I originally thought it was quite interesting, but the pace is too slow. One chapter per day is too small. I have to read other books to maintain it. I almost want to give up.

Come on! Don't care about other people's opinions, just do your own thing.

I hope the author will update quickly, preferably once a day! !