Ibrahimovic Treasure Hunt Team

The writing is still very good, and the narration is okay. But, segment by segment! It seems a bit tiring. Also, the number of words in each chapter is not evenly distributed, with less in the front and more in the back. Generally speaking, each chapter should have 2000-3500 words. Come on!

First of all, congratulations to the author for getting into a better class! And regarding future updates, I have a few suggestions: After writing the outline of Treasure Hunting Team, don't be too eager to write the rest (after all, Team Eevee is about to be finished (restarted)...). Come up with the outline and use enough time to polish it, the quality will definitely be better! As for the new book... I suggest you write it in this book. If it doesn't work, you can change the title... I feel like this can save you the trouble of switching between two books. As for updating, try not to hinder learning when writing a book. A slower update is acceptable. It's not too late to write again when you have some free time. That's pretty much it. Come on! ps: How do I send a private message to Qidian... I've been researching for a long time and can't figure it out qwq

Is the author writing a new book? It's too late.

I just finished watching Eevee Squad recently, and I was confused by the sudden ending. I took another bite out of watching Parallel World. Now I also want to write a fanfic of my own.

Wow, another Pokémon

Is there going to be a stable update recently (˘•ω•˘)

Final comment: Although it ended in a hurry, overall it was pretty good~

Another seedling of the protagonist Ibrahimovic, no more tj, come on!

Suddenly I discovered that this is a fanfic of Team Eevee, so... Double chef ecstasy? Anyway, keep it up~ (By the way, is there a group?)