Nanchengyao

Although the number of words in this book is relatively small, the beginning is well handled and quite attractive. I read it more carefully and caught a few bugs in the article. If you mind, you can delete it. The writing is good, but I have a small suggestion, don't use too modern words. For example, one place said that Nangong Nian does not take into account the interests of the country. This place is more dramatic to me, and it can be said about the family and the country. There is another place that is said to be like a koala... This koala seems to be unique to Australia... I feel like I should use another adjective. Others, both in terms of plot narrative and character description, are better. It would be better to add a little environmental description to set it off. Martial arts arena is just a pleasure. Come on, be more chivalrous!

The writing is not bad, but the description of the actions is not smooth enough. You can think about whether the series of actions is reasonable. The other problem is the same as mine. When typing fast and concentrating on conceiving the plot, typos and incorrect sentences will inevitably appear. We hope that we can learn from each other, evaluate each other, and invest in each other.

I read the first few chapters carefully. The author's writing style is very good, the story plot is also wonderfully narrated, and the structure is well connected. The characters in the opening chapter are well described and very immersive, making it easy for people to remember. The characters are vivid and each chapter is very interesting. I like this style of book very much. The cover and title of the book are very old-fashioned, and I like it very much😍😍❤️ Moreover, the fighting scenes in the book are also very vivid and exciting, which are easy to associate with the pictures and have a full sense of pictures👍👍👍 I have read that there are no poisonous points and routines. This type of martial arts is very novel. When I read it for the first time, I felt like I had discovered a treasure! ! ! 😍❤️❤️ The writing style is not only delicate, but also very concise. It feels like it gave me a different kind of martial arts novel. (Although the author classified it as an ancient romance) —————————— Personally, I feel/think it would be better to use some places (scenes) to describe the protagonist and other characters (maybe I only read the first part, and it's not a good suggestion.) (The level is limited, I don't know if it is right or not, just for reference. The author will delete it after reading it. I feel that the review is not very good, I hope Haihan 😃🙏) Come on! ! ! ✊✊✊ I will definitely support it. I hope you can stick to it and not stop updating. The book is very good, I must take the time to read the rest 👍👍👍

Come on! Looking forward to updates!

Investment 35/100 Recommended votes 41 Collections: 40 Time: 2020.4.6 Updated once a day. It's been a month since the new books were released, so I won't include the previous ones.

[About the title of the book] "Nancheng" is the location of the final martial arts conference. "Yao" firstly means that the road to Nancheng is long, and secondly, it also represents the name of the male protagonist Qing Shiyao. "Nan" and "Yao" also take the names of the male and female protagonists.

I finally opened a character, I can love my own character 🤓

Hoho! The book cover has been changed! The previous one was too soft, not very martial arts-y, more like the Jiangnan water town atmosphere. The current black and white style combined with the red bouquet of flowers is very visual impact!

Jiang Hu's chivalry is not enough, and the fighting scenes are too simple and need to be improved!

The writing is concise, the language is beautiful, the characters are vividly described, and the fighting scenes are full of visuals. The storyline is also good! It would be better if there were more descriptions of the surrounding environment to set it off. Come on! Come on! (ง •̀_•́)ง

This is a long-term opinion collection building.

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I found pictures online that match my idea Deleted if infringing! ! !

As the eldest lady of the Ghost Poison Sect, she dares to love and hate, and she believes that a person is brave enough to pursue love and not be coquettish or pretentious. I just like you and I want to be with you. Chasing love is very courageous and cute. Who doesn't love it?

Happy Chinese Valentine's Day🌹🌹🌹

Long-term collection of character fanart! ! Prize collection! ! (Publish format, publish this post!! Add fanart to the name!) (I am still trying to figure out how to publish activities with prizes, someone who knows can teach me 😂)

I have a weak question, do you need a book club? (Do you need a reply? If not, just treat me as talking to myself...)

Come on, author! The first month's monthly pass is on the shelves and I'll leave it to you 😂 Oh my god, it feels like raising books to raise a daughter 😂

I am a fan of my character, hahahahahaha

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[Character] Duan Qian Steady and wise Zhiduo Xing, steady and wise Zhiduo Star, steady and wise Zhiduo Star, steady and wise Zhiduo Star, steady and wise Zhiduo Star

Haha, I feel relieved to see that so many people like Qian Qianzi. He is smart and wise, and shows a little naughty from time to time. Who wouldn't like such a graceful, mature, steady, careful and considerate young man? Can you shed a tear for the setting of his tool man 🤭

Is there no one to pick such a gentle and gentle young man? Mo Shang is like jade, and his son is unparalleled in the world. Except for him, no other male character in the book can match this sentence, right? Gentle and elegant, personable, kind-hearted, and calm in dealing with things. That's him!

They say they are cruel and ruthless. She is the cute style Cute and cute, but not stupid either. She is very loyal to her feelings~ If you believe in someone, you will never let go. Tang Ning is so cute~ Jing Ning cp. Don't you want to? !

Ask for advice, dear! Do you read a lot of books on QQ? I only have a few Qidian recommendation tickets every day, and the rest are from QQ reading. There can be dozens every day. If they are put on the shelves, no one will read them 😁

I think the author didn't update because he was too busy with school. Anyway, I didn't go to school for many days because I was too busy with my studies.

I wish you a happy Double Day🌸🌸🌸~ It's been a long time, but I've already finished the book. Spread flowers🌸

Although he usually seems to be a fool and acts like a fool but he can always turn the tide at critical moments Due to his childhood experience, he does not trust people, but when he meets Qing Shiyao and the others, his life regains its luster. Meet Tang Ning, the little sun in his life. He finally became the sun~~

Congratulations on chapter 100! Come on! Great!

I just saw the event, cheers＾0＾~