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Let me record some of the shortcomings of the Lai Tu chapter: First of all, the plot of Xu Lai's recovery of memory and the seal of the heavenly seal moved too fast, and there was not enough foreshadowing, resulting in a lack of attraction in the early stage. Secondly, the intersection between Xu Lai and Tu Yue's second life is not much, which seems to be insufficiently emotional, that is, the sense of substitution is insufficient. Finally, in the Lai Tu chapter, I want to express that in the end, Xulai abandoned his cultivation not only for Tu's pleasure, but also in order not to "help the emperor to do evil". However, there was insufficient preparation in the early stage, and the contradictions in the human world were not spread out, so it seemed that he did not reach the desired height in the end. In the Qing Ming chapter, I will polish the plot more and hope to make some improvements. 😁

Your first chapter is very successful. I have to praise you for this. You must grasp the rhythm of the plot. Think about how many words you want to write first, and then write the plot based on this. The plot can be developed by changing generations and other operations. The logic must be rigorous, and the plot must not look nonsense. Personal opinion

The setting of Fushengzhuan is quite special, come on

Wow! Those who voted for recommendation are angels! I don't know what to say either! Pictured above! ❤️❤️❤️

Compare your own role to yourself😁

I didn't expect that it would take me so long to post this final statement. First of all, this book is a scam😂 Originally I planned to have five chapters, but I have only written two chapters so far. Before I started "Nanchang Haruka", I also thought about writing this book to the Hitomi chapter and then finishing it, but I really felt that no one would read it, and at that time, my mind was full of ideas for a new book, so I tentatively started a new book. Unexpectedly, I signed a contract? ? ? So since I opened a new book, my focus has been on that one, and the standard and quality of this one have become worse and worse. In the end, I just updated "Nancheng Yao". The Lai Tu chapter of this book was indeed very good in the early stage, but fell apart in the middle (in the first book, the plot rhythm was too lacking.) The Qing Ming chapter was generally good and relatively complete, but in the later stage, I collapsed for the sake of progress. As for the three unfinished chapters, I think I will reopen the book and finish the unfinished story, and that should be it. Although I don't know how many readers there are, thank you for your companionship in the past three months! (Clasps hands) Finally! Please support my new book "Nancheng Yao"! !

Ah! Don't waste your recommendation votes on this book! My application has been completed! I guess the status will change in the next few days! Go vote for my "Nancheng Yao"! !

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Always add a little life to yourself. 😁

Recommendation tickets have been issued, [please praise] 😁

If it doesn't end, I'll have to write another chapter! ! Otherwise, my investment will be over! !

Looks like I'm going to finish the chapter with my final remarks 😓

Wow! ! Finally, the review was passed! Hahahahahahaha

Big cheers for the author! ! ! !

Already collected, the writing is very good, keep following

The trumpet comes to invest and give recommendation votes, come on

How to say it? The chapter names are very interesting, but there is no need to keep extending them to one, two, three, and four. It is still the early stage. Generally, this is the case when there is a big story in the later stage and you feel that one chapter is not enough to tell. Now this will make readers have a slight bias towards the work and feel that the pace must be slow. In fact, this is not the case, but it is also very troublesome to change, so the author should pay more attention to it later.

Is it so slow to complete the review? ! ? !

The writing is not very good, the description of the environment is lacking the most, and the touching emotions are not reflected. Many scenes are very empty and need to be improved!

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Good writing requires investment, so come on, although it's not my favorite type, I think it's quite interesting!

The writing is very good. Come on. Come on.

I'm here~take her away (*❛ั∀❛ั*)✧*.

It looks ok, I'll save it first and take a closer look when it's empty

Very good, come on! Recommended