Xianxia: the Strongest Dad

I won't say any good things, but I will give you some constructive thoughts. I personally feel that the pace is a bit slow and too detailed. For example, it is almost 20 chapters and I feel that it is not satisfying enough. Of course, from a literary point of view, the author has portrayed it very well. Another point is the strength of the protagonist. Since he is the strongest dad, he must focus on portraying the strongest one. So far, there is no such thing, but the author has handled the details very well, making the plot very coherent.

Give me a recommendation vote! Please, brothers.