I Can't Study with the Eldest Lady

It's the first time you see Kaguya's fanfic, let's talk about your feelings. The novel really brought me a lot of surprises. The author's control and description of the characters are quite good. As for the early stage of the plot, there was a bit of stitching, but it was okay. I was still very happy to read it. After about 200,000 words, it was basically original. (It may be that I haven't read enough, but to be honest, after watching so many Japanese fan and fan dramas, there is basically no such thing as the previous one. Ah, isn't this the plot of a fake love story? (Sense of déjà vu) This feels very comfortable. At about 400,000 words, which is the later stage of the amusement park, where the part-time work plot is about to begin, I can clearly feel that the style of the work has changed slightly, from daily life to... Emmm... Cool writing? But I personally don't mind, I still like both styles. To be honest, there are still relatively few starting points for this kind of subject matter. Even within the scope of light novels, most of them are comedy and fantasy. There are even fewer well-written ones, which can only be compared with more than a dozen. But what puzzles me is why the results are... A bit poor? Maybe it's because people prefer cool writing to daily love stories. I guess the author realized this and changed his style. Finally, I hope the author will persevere and I wish the author can become a god after completing this book😂

I have read Chapter 70, and after thinking about it, I decided to write a book review The author writes in a relaxed and everyday way. It seems that there is a golden finger but it is not very "outstanding" (the protagonist does not use the traditional routine of showing off and pushing others, breaking the limits and becoming a celebrity), which is really nice! ! ! , With a relaxed everyday tone, well written. I won't say too many compliments. Here are some personal opinions (I'll start with three points. Everyone has different opinions, so if you don't agree, you can just turn a deaf ear) 1~ The original anime plot of the President and Shinomiya is too much. Although the male protagonist also participated, he was mostly used as a complainer and did not change the original plot too much. And why do others refer to the original plot of the anime, but I still say it. After all, the original plot in the student union has almost come to an end. 2- As mentioned above, the male protagonist acted as a complainer when the president and the fourth house were engaged in a love war. Then the president and the fourth house took over the spotlight. The male protagonist can also be the leader (even interrupting the two tsunderes). This close friend of the male protagonist will probably be quite uncomfortable as an audience member 3- Personally, I think this The most important point is that according to the current tone, the harem plot is estimated to be gone. But according to the current male protagonist's character: there is no "slowness" and excessive "gentleness" of the harem male protagonist, and there is no strong family status (maybe it will be arranged later). How can there be an excuse for a harem (it will turn into a martial arts fantasy or something later, which will ruin the book). Why are there so many things about the harem: There are a lot of people looking for tutoring from the male protagonist! ! ! Not to mention that there is no self-centered "slowness" that can measure the success of some female protagonists, and besides tutoring, there are also female protagonists. Now that I have read Chapter 70 (Fumino + Yukina), I feel pretty good, but I am starting to try to add science! It's not that I don't like science, it's just that it's not the original work and there's really no need to add all the original characters of the anime. Although the new characters have new plots and new chapters, based on the male protagonist's character I mentioned above, it feels like it will be explosive (it makes me think of many authors of a certain cat) Not much to say, I personally think it is not good to have too many tutoring objects. Two are enough for now (if you want to add new characters, you can add them from other aspects, which is also a bit fresh). I personally feel that there is no need to increase the difficulty of the author's writing (I really don't mean to look down on the author). The above are some of my small opinions, come on! !

Don't say anything else. The overall look and feel is very good. Maybe it's because the author's previous two books were too short and didn't gain popularity. This book may have been the basis for the author's rise. Also, don't always persecute the true concubine, hahahaha. I hope to see more plots where the protagonist appears in front of others. The sports festival part is actually quite good.

The writing is good, but I personally can't accept such a double heroine. On the one hand, this ending is too hasty, and on the other hand, it feels like a betrayal. Although ten years of waiting is something that no one can bear, if it ends like this, it would be hard not to feel like the character has collapsed. In fact, even if you find a suitor for the Shijo Princess, wait for five years for her, and then the two of you will be together. In other words, for the sake of her own feelings, the four true concubines will not marry, and will not entangle the male protagonist, but watch their love alone. This is also very touching, and it will not make the male protagonist's personality collapse. This kind of ending always makes me feel that Shijou is the third party, the male protagonist is a scumbag, and the female protagonist is miserable. It didn't feel warm or anything like that. The author's handling method is not very good. It destroys the character of the male protagonist, makes Shijo Mafei look like a bitch, and makes the female protagonist look very tragic. And after knowing the ending, it was difficult for me to reread the book because it felt a bit sad. In short, the above is purely a personal opinion. (I feel that the previous writing is very good, but the ending is not very acceptable.)

Everything was good in the beginning, but why is there an extra plot like that in the end? Isn't it good to be a couple for the rest of your life? To be honest, I think this is a bit... Enmm... I can't say for Qianhua, but it is definitely a bit unpleasant...

Come on, author.

No way, no way, I only have two chapters in one day and I still want tickets, right? 🔪

Author, your book is one of the few written about Kaguya. In fact, many people like it, but the audience is young. I have to pay to read pirated copies. This is why you always fail to achieve results. I hope you can meet a rich sponsor. Come on. The light novel you wrote is great. Come on.

In order to allow the author to write better works and maintain a good, optimistic and positive coding mentality, a floor dedicated to praising the author will be established here. Come and praise the Milky Way together. Let him be more motivated to create! I'll come first (the author's writing is so good, I have been piracy for thousands of years and I have come to support the genuine version. Come on, author ↖(^ω^)↗, you are the fattest! )

The secretary who doesn't know what he's thinking Secretary もつれるの

The harem still has a single heroine. To be honest, a single heroine doesn't like to see a group of people being ambiguous, and her stomach aches when she sees it A harem is a harem, and a single heroine is a single heroine. If it's a eunuch, just think I'm farting

I want to see the protagonist and Fujiwara Secretariat's partner

New Book Tour (1/100)

Isn't that right? You have to learn from the evil girl even if you're bad at it?

Brothers, if you have recommendation votes, please vote quickly. I heard that the author is going to add three more pieces. As long as the recommendation reaches 10,000,

Secretary Secretary(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Yes

I simply like the character Qianhua, so I strongly feel that the protagonist is a scumbag...

Said by the heroine 2 minutes ago

Is this cancer of the earth? Love it, love it. 😌😌

Dear author, I really like to study this book with my eldest daughter. I hope you can release all the manuscripts and don't be ignorant of praise🐶 (If you really don't know how to praise, I can kneel down and beg you🐶)

Miss Kiriko on the right is the real body

Secondly, this book really shouldn't be placed in the starting point. There are still very few fan readers here. And although I am a poor guy and can't support the original version, I still want to express my thoughts. The protagonist and Qianhua are already partners, so there is no need to add Shijou. I believe some people like to read it. I set a "won't give up" setting for Shijou to let him disturb the protagonist and Qianhua. Qianhua two, sincerely, in reality, no matter how much a woman loves you, this endless sense of betrayal will wear away all love. My friend is like this. He is liked by his girlfriend's best friend and often finds ways to get involved, and then they break up. Then my friend scolds her best friend because of this, and nothing happens anymore. 😅 This plot gave me a strong sense of deja vu.

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To be honest, I have read so many novels, and this ending is really disgusting to me! ! ! I had always said that I would not be with Shijo, but in the end, we ended up with two people for the rest of our lives? ? ? If Chika Fujiwara disagrees, will she get divorced? ? ?

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Why isn't the main character named Kiritani Kazuto?

Do you guys have any other books by Kaguya fans?

Kaguya Fanjin is a very good book. It's just that the ending is a bit like that. The overall level is pretty good. 😁