London Hurling King

Author, I personally suggest that you change the introduction of this book. For competitive sports novels, the system is just used to enhance oneself. The skills of paralyzing fearful opponents will make people feel like the fantasy novel Poison Weed. Everyone will read the introduction first and then decide whether to read it or not. How can it become popular before it starts? So far, the writing is quite good, and there are no such poisonous skills. They are still very reasonable. There is no need to write such poisonous skills in the introduction. Personal opinion, I hope you will adopt it.

The protagonist setting in the first two chapters is really unlikable, and he doesn't act like a young man.

It looks pretty good so far, just a piece of food and grass. During the new book period, I need some daily routines to tell stories at the beginning, but before it was put on the shelves, I could only update it twice a day. The number of words was too few and I couldn't feel it. I always lost interest as soon as I started to get interested. If you are an author, you can check out the author of "I Really Just Want to Strike Iron". In the new era, there are only two updates a day, but one chapter is five to six thousand words long. He doesn't write much about daily games, but the story is told smoothly and is very interesting to read, so it is very popular on sports channels. Before putting it on the shelf, it is necessary to gather popularity and tell the beginning well, so that readers can first understand the surrounding life, personnel and personality characteristics of the protagonist, just like watching an old man at the age of three. That's all. I hope the author will write better and better and this book will become a big hit. Come on, boss(ง •̀_•́)ง

Who doesn't know that our factory is the king of London?

The protagonist is a fan of our factory. Will he go to our factory after staying at Inter Milan for a while? The author will update soon. There are still very few football articles writing about our factory.