I Owe the World an Explanation

The language is a bit wordy and could be more refined. Don't use environment descriptions on a large scale. Generally speaking, fantasy novels only describe the environment during the fighting. For example, the starry sky explodes

The number of words in each chapter is too few, and there are no exciting places that I always see. The plot at the beginning is cliche. If you give me an American movie, it will be like a big event must have happened at the beginning.

The world view is still shown, it depends on whether the plot direction is new or not. So far, it is acceptable and I can't find any major faults.

Come on! Already collected, welcome to visit again!

The title of the book is attractive, but it's still too young. Please keep it updated.

The introduction and title of the book are the first impressions that readers get about a book. The introduction is too simple. I suggest you revise it and include the anime characters or interesting points from the anime. Come on.

This book may have a lot of flaws! Welcome to complain! 😁

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