The Strongest Food-Type Martial Spirit

The first few dozen chapters are really disappointing, and I think this is a mistake that almost all Douluo fans make, that is, they cannot go beyond the plot of the original work. They follow the rules completely and do not dare to change the timeline. Even if a protagonist is added, the plot remains the same [fn=51 ], the later addition of Wuhundian did improve it a little bit, but the author's writing style is really bad. To put it bluntly, it's like a primary school student writing an essay, or even worse. There are many typos. It can be seen that the author does not attach much importance to this book, and details determine success or failure.

Typos affect reading, and the second design has been changed so drastically that it has greatly affected the sense of substitution!

Ka Er is the strongest at seeing and hearing, when will he awaken?

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To be honest, since the protagonist was raised by Wuhun Palace, although they are not good to the protagonist, but, really, without them, the protagonist as a baby can survive? As soon as I saw that the protagonist went to the academy in the original book, I couldn't stop watching it. In the end, he must be the enemy of Wuhun Palace. Right, Also, Wuhundian raises the protagonist and treats the protagonist badly. It's really funny. The purpose of raising children is to do good deeds and win people's hearts. Just because the protagonist is not good-looking, he discriminates against him. Author, do you think Wuhundian is stupid!

I was abandoned because I was ugly, and I really accepted it (; 1_1) Anyway, Douluo Continent is a fantasy world after all. Don't you know there is such a thing as a beast spirit? And there are only two teeth, what's so ugly about it? It is said that Ka Er's mouth was cracked because he opened his mouth too wide while eating donuts. Why can such acquired factors also travel through time?

In fact, the Wuhun Palace is good, but it was ruined by the son of Qian Daoliu. If there was no Wuhun Palace in the original work, those civilian soul masters would not be able to awaken their martial souls at all. There is also the rule that you can receive gold soul coins before level 40. The original book said that the money was paid by the Wuhun Palace and those empires, and was issued by the Wuhun Palace. But in fact, those nobles did not look down on civilian soul masters at all, and they just didn't want Wuhun Palace to become superior in the eyes of civilians. Don't squirt your semen

Emmmm, write well and don't mess around.

I'm very confused. It takes hundreds and thousands of years for soul beasts to grow up. Human lifespan is so short and the population is so large. How can we maintain the relationship between supply and demand?

Write well and update three times a day is better

The most annoying thing about the combination of pirates and the Douluo Continent system is that Devil Fruit is simply an insult in the Douluo world. Their abilities are limited, not to mention the superhuman body, and they cannot be developed at all. It's my own strength and I still have to absorb soul rings to explain the moves. It's so funny.

If the wall doesn't agree, I will obey you. People are going to kill you just because you and she were brothers. Just let him go. Then Wuhun Palace has raised you for so long. You even killed someone, you are really strong

Afraid of water, the protagonist doesn't take a bath. How does the protagonist give birth to a child? It becomes soft when exposed to water.

What the hell is it about? I can't even divide it into paragraphs at the very least. It's awkward to read, there are a lot of typos, the experience is not good, the connection between text and dialogue is awkward, and the author's good hand has been beaten to pieces.

How to say it? It's a trash book. Originally, it was written for Katakuri, but you made Katakuri completely different, and it was well written. But then you turned a strong man into a slick ghost in the killing city? It's a pity that you threw away the only selling point and added your disgusting bad taste. I'm talking about this material.

If a martial spirit that is obviously a food type has to get a powerful attack type soul ring, it would be better to just turn the martial soul into a Nuo Nuo fruit and then add a domineering setting, and then make all the soul rings into food type... The One Piece system and the soul master system are combined, corresponding to Tang San's internal force system and soul master system.

White-eyed wolf! What do you think, author? To create a protagonist with such a distorted outlook on life, Wuhun Palace has raised him in vain for so many years, and his kindness should be repaid with a spring of water! What did you get in exchange for the grace of living!

A shady protagonist with a dull personality, keen on giving away girls, a tool man, and a lone star of evil.

I just discovered this book today and read it in one sitting. It's rare to find a novel that is powerful but not offensive. The charm of Ka Er is that the author's writing style is also good, but there are many typos, but fortunately it does not affect reading. I hope the heroine is not original. After all, when reading a fanfic, all you want is a sense of substitution. It would be a bit of a drama to create an original heroine. I can make a suggestion for a single heroine. Qian Renxue is quite good. She was estranged from Bibi Dong in her childhood because she did not receive love from Bibi Dong. In fact, she still has the idea of proving it to Bibi Dong in her heart. Tiandou plans hard, wants to become the emperor of Tiandou, and complete the plan of the Wuhun Temple in Tiandou. People like Ka Er who have awakened the domineering domineering spirit of the Overlord can easily hit the softness in her heart. In addition, I personally prefer the character Qian Renxue, so I hope the author can play Qian Renxue as the heroine. Of course Qian Renxue is the best, otherwise the characters in the book will work anyway. With Kaji's kind of character, I can't imagine what a harem would be like, so it would be nice to have a single female protagonist. This book is quite good and I have already invested in it. Good luck to the author.

Come on, I hope the heroine is Bibi Dong or Qian Renxue

Selling dog meat with a sheep's head is another auxiliary trick to attract readers. As a result, the protagonist is aggressive. There are too many books of this kind. The Seven Treasures Glazed Pagoda is used as a support tower for King Li Tian. The martial spirit is Youmi, but the second martial spirit is output. There are also the martial arts that are made of Qinglian. The second martial spirit is output, and the third martial spirit is cultivated. Isn't there An An Xin who can help? An auxiliary can fight better than the main C, can resist better than a tank, and can practice faster than anyone else.

? Did you write this as a supporting character? . . . Cowhide, just like Long Ao Tianwen a long time ago. It's not easy to grow up with this kind of IQ

Katakuri is the son of Kaido, the strongest creature

If there is no divine realm in the setting, it will be difficult to write in the later stages.

Are you the protagonist? This is the first time I've ever seen a main character written like a piece of trash.

You said that, I don't know if I want to read it 😥

If you want a female lead, you don't have to have a cute mouth. No one else would play Kizaru, but they wouldn't dare to arrange a female lead who likes Kizaru.

Peripherals from enthusiastic readers Protagonist panel Name: Katakuri Power: Establish a navy, claiming to be the supreme commander of the navy, Admiral Martial spirit: Nuo Nuo of the food system Weapon: use Nian Nuo form trident made with Wuhun Height: twelve years old (one meter eight), eighteen years old (two meters two) Appearance: Ka Er looks like he has no fangs (do you want to have a female protagonist) Plug-in: Ka Er's body Physical quality, three colors of domineering (the knowledge color and the armed color are acquired since childhood, and the overlord color is awakened later), practicing the armed color since childhood makes the body strong and full of innate soul power The first soul ring: Body shaping, can turn part of the body into a glutinous ball, and with the armed color can extend the hands and feet to attack the enemy, or be immune to some damage The second soul ring: Proliferation, can produce a large number of sticky glutinous balls, can eject a large number of glutinous balls from the body to bind the enemy, the stickiness is amazing The third soul ring: Pseudo-domain glutinous terrain, which can create a terrain full of sticky glutinous slurry. The enemy's speed is limited in the terrain, but he can glide freely in the field (useless against air targets) The fourth soul ring: Rapid shaping, which can quickly change the glutinous balls ejected from the body into various forms The fifth soul ring: Flame rice cake, which can quickly ignite the sprayed glutinous balls and add burning damage The sixth soul ring: Peerless donuts , can make multiple large donuts, stretch out giant fists with armed colors from the mouth of the donuts to attack the enemy Seventh Soul Ring: Nuonuo Giant, spray a large amount of glutinous slurry from the body to form a giant form, which can be equipped with armed colors Eighth Soul Ring: Mirror Cake, can create a mirror cake that leads to the mirror world (opaque, low-end version of Divine Power) Ninth Soul Ring: No idea The protagonist can compete for the Poseidon inheritance