The God-Eater Legion

The plot advances at a reasonable pace, but the descriptions of some character scenes are not reasonable, making it quite difficult to read. When writing a big scene - such as the shopping mall in the first few chapters, you can focus the camera on the bad guy and reflect the atmosphere through the interaction between the villain and the character.

Your introduction and book title and cover. It makes people feel bright at the first moment. Let's put it this way, a good title, a good cover and a good introduction. Can attract many readers. Even if my writing is average, I can still get up. So generally when I see your introduction and cover, I basically feel like there is nothing to comment on. Your introduction is very interesting. It doesn't look like it was written by a new author, but it looks like an introduction written by an old author. Very innovative. There is nothing more to say. Work hard to write, come on!!!

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