Star Commander

It's well written, but a bit lacking. I want to read more! 😄

Not bad, not bad, the setting is very good, it can both operate and attack troops. Just don't pounce.

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

Author, I bet that if your novel is not popular, I will eat my Huawei phone.

I haven't seen this kind of interstellar war novel in a long time. Invested. Look at this novel.

Come on, author, I haven't seen an interstellar war novel in a long time. . Recommendation tickets are given~

The first few pictures look pretty good, and focus on commanding fleets. This kind of writing is rarely written anymore. Most of the writers who write science fiction are writing fantasy under the skin of science fiction. I feel a strange feeling when I read it, or it is playing "historical retrogression" somewhere. Good guy, the boarding battle has come out, and I don't understand. Now a missile can hit you from half the world. In the interstellar era, it won't be too much to hit you from a few kilometers away in the sky, right? By the time you rush over, you'll have already played ball. The author is still very suitable to my taste. Come on.

When I see those two women, it's gross. The description is the same as cerebral palsy. It's 2020. Why are there such female characters?

I've read forty chapters, and everything else is fine. It's just that the author is a little confused about the naval battles of World War II and the interstellar wars. I guess the author hasn't played Eve carefully. He's already brain-controlled. What kind of crew do you need? Isn't it good to be able to command by myself? If you have to have a team story, you can write a logistics ship, a stealth ship, etc.

What's my starting point these past two days? I saw that they were all novels written by eunuchs.

Chapter 7, I don't know what else is going on behind the two girls, but I can't stand it anyway. I watch Battleship and Star Wars, not Urban Tsundere.

The book is not bad, but I suggest that the author slightly revise the first few chapters. The long background introduction at the beginning is really discouraging. For example, brain plug-ins and the like can be introduced slowly after entering the story instead of being discussed in a long paragraph along with the career settings. The first two chapters are full of various settings and are difficult to attract people to read.

Author, I don't know if you can see it, but I have something to say. If there is anything wrong, please correct me, don't curse When the protagonist and the girl meet, it is meaningless to compare each other's strength. The protagonist is a commanding talent. When all the assaulters are dead, the protagonist will be of no use The second point is to reduce some ambiguous plots as much as possible. Adding ambiguity in this type of novel feels a bit poisonous. And since you are the captain, your crew will also be your team in the future. Can you describe them a little more? The parts I have seen so far only describe women, and they are basically selling meat, including the first battle. Each crew member did not leave a deep impression on me. Simply put, there is no independent personality of the characters How can I put it, it is not easy to write this kind of novel. Since the author writes this kind of niche genre, he must have his own passion for it. I hope you can write better and better. When you become a god, I will be a long-time fan.

Author, let me ask you something. Do you dress as a woman?

I just saw it said it was updated the day before yesterday. Please vote quickly and don't let it die.

Not bad, recommended for collection! (￣O￣) . Z Z

More updates, good-looking, supported

I hope you won't be an eunuch. If you haven't read it yet, I plan to give you a reward if you subscribe to 500,000 words.

Why an empire? An imperialist empire or a monarchical empire? This name doesn't sound nice at all

I dropped it when I saw the chapter on painting. I still pretend to know how to do it if I'm not good enough. 1. Space battleships are still internal forces. You are not allowed to change the color (you may be able to do so if you are an ace), and in space battles, you are far away from each other to avoid collision, and the enemy is further away, so you should rely on radar to identify targets. And locked. 2. I don't know how to say that tactical micro-management is a bit unreasonable. If it is Gundam, it might be possible 3. The author should not have played eve much😂😂😂😂

It is recommended that the author refer to eve's weapon settings, names, and levels. This will save you a lot of work. You can also look for NetEase planning to understand the history of the empire. You can write millions of words.