
One Punch Man: the Revealer
一拳超人之揭秘者
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 634k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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310Chapters
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With the luck of a child from a plane like King, anyone who wants to be exposed will either be beaten to death by a weirdo, or be crushed to death by a meteorite, or be killed by Saitama's monster attack, or suffer a myocardial infarction, or the evidence will be scrapped.
I really like Yi Punch, and I believe there are many people who like Yi Punch novels because of this. As long as the writing is good, grades are not a problem. However, has the author ever thought about why his grades are poor? He is too watery and too verbose. For example, more than a hundred chapters in (I forget the specific chapter), the protagonist and his gang captured a dozen weirdos and tied their mouths with ropes. You actually arranged for Stinger to be silly here, beeping at a gagged weirdo, and letting the weirdo talk. Putting aside whether or not Stinger is that stupid, the plot alone is a bit childish. Later, the staff of the Hero Association arrived and wanted to give the weirdos anesthetic injections. This was enough to be ignored, but it was specifically written that these staff members had difficulty in giving anesthesia because of the weirdos' squirming and struggling (being tied up). Please, are they that amateur? Also, where should we focus? These miscellaneous fish have too many roles. If you write all the irrelevant stuff like this, it will only consume the readers' patience. We are not paying to read daily life. You are in the fantasy and science fiction genre.
I just read the introduction, is this a double standard? Love it, love it
The title reveals the secret, but the result is that I can't see the secret. It has changed from the king's battle for the record to the protagonist's battle for the record. What I want to see is the secret, not the second king.
The title and introduction of the book are all intended to clear up Saitama's name, but the result is that the main character gets all the credit. Saitama is thought of as a pendant by others, and every time I try to explain it, there is no help. Even if you become the main photographer of UP, you will not clear his name. In the original work, Saitama's three years of work as a hero were robbed by others, and he was wrongly accused. It was very uncomfortable. The author said that he wanted to clear his name, so he gave the credit to the protagonist, which is even more disgusting. Maybe he will be cleared of his name later. Sorry, I have already poisoned him.
It was said that it was to clear Saitama's name, but the reputation was taken away by the protagonist. What's the difference? Writing that introduction made me speechless. I don't know if Saitama will come back in the future. If I misunderstood, I apologize in advance, but I was poisoned 😅
To be honest, after it was released, it was too watery and I couldn't watch it at all. The supporting characters were forced to be smart, but the protagonist revealed the secret? The protagonist keeps talking about Saitama beating Saitama and then looking helpless. The staff laments that he deserves to be so low-key, we understand, we understand. . . .
If the protagonist enters the one-punch world like this, he will probably become a camera weirdo or an up-and-down master weirdo?
Saitama is already S-level, how can he still be ignored by the hungry wolf after being beaten like that by Boros? I'm afraid I can't get rid of this natural passerby attribute.
The protagonist has always said that he wants to expose the truth, but I don't see much willingness to expose the truth. What's so helpless, I just mention one or two sentences every time that it was not me, and the one-punch person is not clear about things related to Saitama's strength, so he can't open up and talk about it: I really do it myself, and the main force is really Saitama. Although Saitama revealed his strength, he always believed that the protagonist was the same or even stronger. Saitama was incidental, "I didn't expect this ordinary passerby to be so picky." In the final period, the protagonist's strength in picking up pieces surpassed Saitama's, and he was the most popular hero. He perfectly matched his wishes and finished the show. Is Saitama's strength the truth? The truth is out. Did the protagonist pick up the pieces? With one punch, I was the strongest just now, and became the number one up player at the same time But I always feel uncomfortable, with my brain capacity I just can't think of words to indicate what's wrong...
Is the heroine a tornado? I want to find a tornado with a single female protagonist. . .
It feels like this 😏
Luck is inherently strength, and luck is highly accidental.
I recommend a book to everyone. One Punch Man: The Emperor's Engine" This is a completed book with 1.23 Million words and 519 chapters. Some of the routines are similar to this book. Although it is unfinished, it is still quite interesting. If you can't stand the author's slow updates, you can try this book. No heroine.
The idea is good, but a bit bland. It can be seen that the author does not know how to write battles. If the battle scenes can be written better, the popularity will be higher.
The creativity is good, but it's too watery and the writing is too poor.
Is there any heroine who is a tornado? If so, please let me know~
What is the protagonist's purpose? So did it appear? I feel like a mess.
Does the author have a map of One Punch Man's world? I only found out yesterday when I was visiting that the hut in the Wolf Chapter was actually in City S. I always thought it was in City D. I just want to know if City D and City S are adjacent? ? ?
Horse racing? Ten yuan a time 1.🐎 2.🐺 3.🐗 4.🐴 5.🐘
I'm so disappointed that I won't watch it.
Yi Punch is a well-written recommendation, Yi Punch for Justice. Although it is a eunuch, the quality is too high and it has hundreds of thousands of words.
Because invisible pretense is the most deadly. If everyone in One Punch Man knew he was a hero. It doesn't look good
The content of this book after it is released is watery! Is there any boss?
It's great to have readers, unlike me who rushes to the streets
If you do this, I doubt whether Uprising can become One Punch Man. The first is exercise, the second is living environment, and the third is recipes. This is the path to growth, okay?
Still want to race horses? 1.🐳 2.🐬 3.🐙 4.🐟 5.🐠